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[Loli’s purpose: to build a harem and recruit beautiful concubines from all over the world]
When she was five years old, she angrily vowed to pick up the most beautiful men in the world no matter what because of the teasing of the evil handsome man.
Quiet late night, cool breeze...
The dull Bai Momo didn't know that he was secretly kissed by his brother [Huangfu Junxi] at night.
I met a cat holding Bai Momo's innocent limited edition SpongeBob SquarePants baby in its mouth. For no reason, the handsome man "Jiang Chenxi" said he was flat-chested, and vowed to pursue Bai Momo...
Because of 'Jiang Chenxi', I almost turned into a barbecue patty. Thinking back to the days when I turned into a sandwich burger, I should shudder... A thunderbolt came from the clear sky, and I became a sandwich burger again.
The 'innocent' sinister housekeeper brother [Leng Moxi] attacks, and Bai Momo's demonic factor appears... He shamelessly asks the housekeeper brother to hold him. Who would have expected that the alluring beauty [Huangfu Luoyu] asks Bai Momo to come with him?
While going to bed, Bai Momo broke into a cold sweat and remembered that when she was sleeping with her brother Luo Yu, she wet the bed...
He, [Leng Mo Jue] took Bai Mo Mo away from Leng Mo Xi, but little did he know that he was the so-called Hun Danjiang Chenxi! But he said affectionately: Little girl, I am only gentle to you.
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The article creates an image of a heroine who dares to love and hate, is cute, somewhat naive, innocent, and seemingly innocent...
Usually the introduction is the basic points of the article. The introduction of the article is very cute and cute. Especially the first sentence [Loli’s purpose: to build a harem and include beautiful men and concubines from all over the world] makes people want to read the content of the article.
.The first instinct that comes to people is that of sweet pampering...
The foreshadowing buried in the wedge arouses the reader's interest in reading and makes people think about who the person who made Bai Momo swear to have a beautiful man in the harem is. It also lays the groundwork for the following plot.
This kind of pampering is relatively common on campus, but there are still some cute things in Beibei's articles that make people laugh without any intuition.
The appearance of the characters is well described and detailed. The psychological description of the characters is also well expressed. Each chapter can always lay down a good foreshadowing.
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The introduction seems a bit messy, so it’s best to sort it out a little bit. This will give people a clear impression... The description of the details can be more delicate. More descriptions of the environment will make the article more beautiful.
-At this moment, I have Huan Jue’s deepest thoughts. Let the clouds carry my heartfelt blessings and embellish your sweet dreams.
——Huanjue Long Commentary Department: Xixia
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Chapter completed!