Some reflections and summaries on the suggestions put forward by readers

Author: Jingjing Xiaojianyu

Some reflections and summaries on the suggestions put forward by readers

One: Reflection.

While reading, many readers not only enthusiastically helped to catch bugs, but also made some suggestions.

For example, the dividing symbol / for buildings and pharmaceuticals.

For example, according to the way I write it——

The cooldown of weak healing potions is 60/second.

My original intention was to use / as a symbol for dividing units.

However, some book friends later pointed out that this was actually wrong and completely different from what I meant.

I just realized it. After staying up all night today and waking up in the afternoon, I took advantage of the time to sort out the previous chapters and corrected all these points.

Of course, due to the modification of the original chapter version, some chapters and paragraphs will be automatically deleted by the system. Please forgive me.

Thank you all for your help, this book will get better and better.

2: Disadvantages of data-based novels.

Readers who have read the updated rules and comments on the launch should know that I am an old author opening a new vest.

The subject matter that Xiaoyu was good at before was entertainment, and his hand speed was not bad, he could write about 4,000 words an hour.

However, I changed the subject and the track. This was my first contact with the data-based novel type. It was very difficult to write, and my hand speed dropped drastically to about 2,000.

In the novel, some equipment, accessories, weapons, and potions require real-time searching for information and secondary design.

Xiaoyu even spends more time searching for information and resetting certain items than doing formal coding.

Just like yesterday’s royal delicacy.

The original game setting is to summon an ornamental pet (which follows the protagonist, has no health, no attack, cannot be killed, and cannot be of any help).

But is this appropriate in a novel?

This setting does not conform to the underlying logic I constructed for the novel!

So when it comes to Royal Deliciousness, I thought about a few ideas.

The first idea: Turn the ornamental pets summoned by Royal Delicious into combat pets?

But in Terra's worldview, giving a pet health points can ensure that it will not die when facing mobs, but how can we ensure that the pet will not die when facing bosses?

If the pet dies, is it necessary to set the pet's function?

The second idea is to merge it into the slime staff to strengthen the slime staff.

But this can be done for the protagonist, but what if other people don’t have staffs? The resources dropped by the boss are not suitable for all people, but only for a single individual. The applicability of royal delicacies is not established.

I thought about it and ruled it out.

The third idea: Increase the upper limit of the summoning bar.

After self-vetoing the first two settings, I finally decided to set Royal Delicious 2 to increase the summoning limit.

This setting has applicability, has an improvement effect in combat, is suitable for the general public, and will not affect other original logic.

This point in the novel only has about a hundred words, but it made me think about it for two hours.

Also, in today’s chapter update, a large number of secondary designs have been implemented, which are all reflected in the remarks column of accessories.

I described the Alliance Battle, the Mechanic Guild, and focused on Zach the Mechanic.

Some readers may wonder why these are introduced in the notes, but in fact these are foreshadowings, which are what readers often call digging holes to bury future plot lines.

In the previous era, the protagonist is currently inaccessible and not understood by readers.

Sometimes we can only describe the details through these details to gradually reveal the events of the previous era.

And the most important scarlet heritage party.

Not only does the scarlet inheritance have to be superior, but it also cannot destroy the original logic. After all, I just want to make him slightly invincible, not directly invincible. The functions of various inheritance powers and scarlet powers must be compared with the ninja inheritance written before.

Why write about Ninja Heritage? This is the meaning. Without comparison, there will be no standard of measurement, and everyone will not know how strong he is.

This is one of the meanings of writing about ninja heritage (of course there are other functions).

To be honest... I wrote this chapter of 4,000 words until six o'clock this morning.

But I have to admit that even if I do this, there will still be shortcomings. After all, it is my first time to dabble in it.

I woke up this afternoon after reading some readers’ feedback.

I talked to a few friends.

I have been in this circle for a long time, and I know a lot of people, from thousands of people, to big boutiques, and I chat with them whenever I have time.

I told them about a current problem with this book——

Does the harvest of data novels need to be described in detail?

Finally, just now, I finally came up with an idea through a discussion with a friend - the details are appropriate!

That's right, even if you just look at these four words, they actually help a lot in the construction of novel trends and the underlying logic of the novel.

I have been busy for several hours, including the revision of the entire book about /, and some omissions. You can re-download it and the latest version will appear.

In a few days, I will set up a single chapter related to the work to list the current protagonist’s shelter and the protagonist’s complete personal panel information.

As for the novel, I wrote a complete information panel to prevent some readers from forgetting about the protagonist’s strength after reading it, and only the corresponding part will be posted in the future.

There is also the most important modification of writing ideas, which is——

In the future, I will also go over the production process of consumable materials and try to be as brief as possible.

Of course, my background will provide real-time statistics for each chapter, but in the published main text, I hide this process and try to write as much content as possible to ensure that it is not watery.

To be honest, no author wants to be fooled when it comes to a subject he loves.

Otherwise... I wouldn't stay up all night just writing 8,000 words.

As for items that have appeared once and been described in detail, I rarely continue to write about them a second time, right?

However, since readers have raised questions, I will actively correct them.

Third: Order extra updates for all orders.

The current score of this book is 700 average subscriptions. Starting from 500 average subscriptions, every 100 average subscriptions will add an additional chapter. The current total is 2 chapters.

For every 100 chapters in the monthly ticket, one chapter will be added. Now it has reached 300. The previous statistics were 200. One chapter will be added in the monthly ticket.

The total progress bar is [6/37].

Please rest assured, readers, although there is a gap between the results and the expected results.

But this is Terra! This is a Terra novel!

Looking through the entire website, not to mention finding a better Terra novel than mine, it is not easy to find even a few Terra novels, right? I should be proud of myself for achieving this!

So don’t worry, everyone, although my friends have many high-quality products, big ones, and thousands of orders, I will not be too ambitious. This novel will definitely be written in a down-to-earth manner.

If you have any opinions, everyone can submit them.

Right!

Some readers also asked about the readership.

But...I'm not sure how many people are going to join the group.

Why don't you guys tell me first, if there are many people who want to join the group, I will create a group, and then they will take me online to play Disaster and Terra.

Of course... this is not fishing. How can the author's affairs be called fishing?

This is called going out to collect materials!

Do you want to join the readership group?

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