[Pin][Essence][Comment] A rough review of the Two Snakes "Repair of the Hundred Ages"

When reading books in the dark night, I always like to read and think.

So storytelling is the same.

There are few books written by authors in one go, and their mood determines the quality, so the content of each paragraph needs to be summarized, which is more in line with certain rules.

Let’s talk about the concept of the subject first.

It is considered a theme of urban cultivation. It is reincarnated and inherited the experience and soul abilities of the previous hundred lives. This imagination alone makes me ashamed.

I have read many of this method of entering the topic, and the most successful one is *, because it is written more acceptable.

The author of this novel must be a bit too YY, which gives readers a bit exaggerated and unreal. I don’t object to writing this way, because it does seem to be very pleasant to read, but I personally think that the protagonist should give a certain growth process, and don’t be so awesome and despise everyone’s appearance as soon as you start. This is actually not a shortcut, it will not seem grand enough and too YY.

Let’s talk about the development of the plot.

The narrative in the previous chapters is quite smooth, especially the background explanation hidden in the description, which is very natural, unlike some novels that like long-term introductions, which are as boring as some boring and boring as some novels, and the author of this article obviously has some basic skills in this regard.

Moreover, the most taboo thing about a novel is to be similar to other similar works. In Chapter 3, the new idea of ​​the Big Dipper made me a little interested. I think this is good. There must be more novel things in the article so that readers can continue reading.

The author can still master the plot, because many newcomers will not be able to grasp the key points of writing and writing well, such as writing too much about the protagonist's childhood, which will cause the plot to be delayed and it will be quite laborious to read. However, this novel wisely chose to briefly introduce it, which is very good.

Speaking of this, I want to talk about my biggest feeling when I read this article, that is, it is lightness.

Yes, the meaning of this word "日" means that the language is too old-fashioned, and when it comes to the protagonist's ability to surpass everyone, it seems that the author is shocked and cannot impress the readers. The psychological description is not delicate enough, and even when it is time to be delicate.

For example, I personally don’t appreciate the content of being an instructor, there is nothing too outstanding, and the language is a bit dull.

Sometimes, appropriate emotional descriptions, mental ideas, and even humorous words can add a lot of highlights to the article.

It was not until the time when the writing involved emotions, the author's feeling gave to the readers gradually came out.

Urban cultivation is also a type of urban superpower. Although the author classified his works as the cultivation category, the main body of the story is actually in modern times. And such articles are difficult to write about in terms of emotions.

I can guess the role that Murong Wanqiu plays in the whole novel after reading this. The heroine should not be one, but the first appearance is often not light, which requires the author to grasp the plot. Ershe's performance is very good, and the plot tension is very good. In addition to the lack of psychological details and other places, the content and language description are still good, which is quite successful.

Regarding the description of paragraph H, I have to say that the Ershe is still not as hot as it is already very attractive. Although it is already very attractive, you should pay attention to the suspense or other things that can cause readers to continue reading. You can consider this for yourself.

A good novel must have conflicts intensified, so that it can have a tortuous feeling and be enjoyable to read.

Wars between women are often a contradiction, and this contradiction must be reflected in the protagonist. The control of Ershe in this aspect is still good, at least the fluctuations in the plot are good, so it is the king to make people want to continue reading.

However, the ups and downs and exciting feeling between the plots is still not enough. Although it may be a bit harsh, it is not something that every author, especially a newcomer, can achieve, but in terms of the author's own potential, you can do it.

Believe in yourself and adding practice in this area will definitely make the work more perfect.

And I have to say that the author seems to be growing as the novel continues. This growth refers to the grasp of the writing style and macroscopicity. It can be seen that the subsequent chapters are more fluent and natural than before, and the sentences are gradually becoming lively. It can be seen that the author is also growing gradually when writing this work. This is a necessary point to become an excellent writer.

Okay, I have talked a lot. Let me summarize the current content of nearly 60,000 words.

Throughout the article, the author's basic skills are still OK, the story conception, cultivation is new, and the plot is still OK. He is a very potential writer.

The main reason is that the text lacks insightful and thought-provoking classic words or plots, the writing style is a bit rough and the psychological description is not good enough.

I hope the author can humbly accept other people's suggestions and gradually improve them.

Believe that you can write better content.

The above content is purely the personal opinion of Dark Night. This comment is only related to the author and myself, and has nothing to do with third parties. Other readers are advised not to judge this work by this.
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