Chapter 103 Her rest day [3K mid-chapter]

The next day, weekend, at 10:00 am.

In Arakawa District, in the magic cafe under the Kashigengawa building, Kashigen Shiori, who was yawning but extremely energetic, looked at Takeda Risa in front of her with great anticipation.

Last night, she wrote the article for a long time.

The effect of the material was remarkable. She gained many ideas and words for reference, which allowed her to fill in her previous ideas and repair the content she had written, while the content that had been stuck before was naturally passed by her.

"This time the original manuscript..."

Takeda Risa pondered the words and raised her eyebrows, her eyes fell on Shiori Kashiro's face, and her eyes reflected the pretty face that was very tired but extremely energetic between her eyebrows and eyes.

"Does it need to be modified?"

Shiori Kashiro suddenly became nervous. Takeda Risa can definitely be called the "industry old man" of Kashirokaku. She is one of the most experienced editors. She has a unique and sharp vision and can judge the quality of a book to the point.

"No, this manuscript is a one-to-one replica of the ideas you told me about at that time." Takeda Risa shook her head and simply gave up Kashiyuan Shiori's random thoughts, "There is no problem in quality. Even if I told you before, this subject is not actually pleasing, but the same sentence is still the case. As long as it is good enough, it can break many rules and regulations.

"If it is from the editor's standpoint, then I personally think that the manuscript you have shown at the moment has considerable potential.

"Some places may need to be repaired, for example, some small details can be done more smoothly, and some dialogues can be pondered.

"However, I personally think that this part of the renovation needs to be made after a few days, and then calm down before making a decision."

Upon hearing this, Bai Yuanshizhi breathed a sigh of relief, and then she looked at her editor curiously, "What if it's from a personal standpoint?"

She understood what the "if" of Takeda Risa means. From the editor's standpoint, the other party said that it was official, so from the personal standpoint, the other party's thoughts may be somewhat deviated.

"Well, I'll think about how to tell you..." Takeda Risa was silent for a moment, then raised her head and looked at Shiori Kashiro, who looked at her in the air, "I'll just say it straightforwardly. I always feel an indescribable sense of déjàn's male protagonist in your writing."

Takeda Risa had seen Kitagawa Che. She even saw photos of this young author at Kamino Sumi.

Under this series of conditions, whenever she sees the "he" written by Kazuo Shiori, especially the traits that Kitagawa Che have given her profound feelings, she will unconsciously associate this "he" with Kitagawa Che.

This is her experience after hearing too many complaints from friends.

This is also the reason why most first loves have no good results. Everyone is very awkward and doesn’t know how to like someone. When they are hurt and separated, they finally learn how to like them. When they treat someone, their first love is no longer there.

"I see."

Bai Yuanshizhi nodded thoughtfully, but the other party reminded her.

However, she also made it clear that the other party was not her, and the experience she provided could only be discussed in general. How to use it and whether or not is something she should think about.

"So, let's get back to the topic." Takeda Risa coughed gently, pulling the topic back to the original point, "I want to know, is this book over so far, or is it still not finished part of it?"

The original manuscript Bai Yuanshi showed her was only about 60,000 words. Judging from the average size of the novel about campus romance, the number of words is considered to be average, but the overall story gives her the feeling that it is more like it has not yet ended to some extent.

“There is still a part that has not been finished.”

Shiori Kawayuan gave an answer.

On the one hand, it is based on the time relationship last night, and on the other hand, it is the most critical. She actually did not think about the ending of the story.

“How long will it take?”

Takeda Risa raised a problem.

She personally is very optimistic about the original manuscript and likes it very much. As a reader, she is looking forward to the development of the plot in the future, whether the male and female protagonists can be together, and whether the second female lead will leave.

However, personally, she prefers another heroine with an indescribable sense of fragility than the heroine of the warm civilian family.

"Before the end of this month?"

Shiori Kawayuan thought about it and gave such an answer.

She didn't say too much, so she gave words like "just these few days". On the contrary, she gave herself a relatively generous time.

On the one hand, it is based on the current yesterday, and on the other hand, she herself needs to think about how to finish the two heroines.

The current plot has exceeded her initial estimate, and she can no longer artificially interfere with the reversal of the characters in her writing.

“Relatively speaking, time is quite abundant.”

Takeda Risa nodded, as she recognized Kashiyuan Shiori's speech.

"Yes, leave enough time, don't hurry, no one is forcing me." Bai Yuanshiori nodded and made a small joke, "It's comfortable without a deadline."

Hearing this, Takeda Risa rolled her eyes and thought to herself that you are so awesome, is it really okay to talk about this in front of the editor?

It feels like talking about not doing homework in front of a subject teacher, and the main focus is courage.

"What are you going to make arrangements next?" Takeda Risa coughed gently, took out her cell phone and looked at the time. It was still early now, and there was still half an hour before eleven o'clock. "Will you wait a moment, have lunch here before leaving, or do you mean?"

"I plan to go home right away."

Bai Yuanshimao yawned a big yawn.

She didn't plan to touch this again today. She had even thought about it. After the matter was over, she took a taxi home and had a sleep, making up for the sleep she had last night.

"Well...I'll take you home."

Takeda Risa hesitated for a moment and said this.

"Thanks."

Unusually, Shiori Kawayuan did not show off, but obediently responded.

"Wow."

Hearing this, Takeda Risa let out a low voice, looked at Shiori Kazuno in surprise, thinking that you have become unfamiliar.

This girl is not like this.

However, Takeda Risa thought about it and then smiled relievedly. Why Shiori Kashiro did not matter? What is important is that her transformation saved her from a persuasion process.

If the process is simplified and the result remains unchanged, that is good.

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