Chapter 1777: Shenmu's Tears of Blood (12 more)(2/2)
In the north of the mainland, there was a sea of flowers. At that time, most of the blood-red leaves were flying over there and eventually withered.
The sea of flowers was bigger and more dreamy, like a fairyland.
Only the Order Heavenly Clan turned into flowers.
And on this continent, the mortals of Qingyun who are still living in the mountains and wilderness are still crying for the sacred trees.
The Order Heavenly Clan will not forget this day.
Because, history books will record that they killed seven million elite troops on an inconspicuous and barren continent.
Among them, 1.8 million died at Green Soul Sword Peak.
Five million and two hundred thousand died at the Qingyun Sacred Tree.
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Chapter 12, big explosion!
I haven’t written so much in a long time.
After I finished writing, I felt sore in my back and felt dizzy... but my heart was burning.
Returning to the plot of the sun, compared to the thrill of stepping on people when geniuses compete, the series of themes of war, home, protection, and changing one's destiny against the will of the gods can make my heart surge, as if I am in that scene, together
She shed tears for the death and rebirth of the Qingyun sacred tree.
Regarding this topic, I would like to say a small episode.
I wrote the three chapters last Saturday (the three chapters that I couldn’t stand up on my knees) for a long time. They are relatively large and have a sufficient number of words.
After I finished writing that day, I felt refreshed and amazed. I read it again and was impressed by my talent. Because it had been a while since I wrote the story of The Sun, and when I wrote about oppression and difficulties, I also experienced
There was a strong resonance, as if the life and death crisis faced by Qinghun Palace had affected him.
So well written!
I sighed.
It ignited my own passion!
Awesome!
So I happily uploaded it and waited for readers to be impressed by my talent.
The next day, I took a look at the comment section with full confidence.
Reader: water.
I spurted out a mouthful of blood on the spot~
The joys and sorrows in the human world are indeed incompatible. 0.0.
Regarding this issue, I actually talked with my wife
(Every time I finish writing, I will let her read it first, so she is Bai Jian’s number one female fan)
I said: Any high C requires extreme suppression and foreshadowing to have the strongest explosion. The foreshadowing requires a cumulative number of words and repeated renderings. Although it is more appetizing to arrange for the protagonist to appear at the end of the third chapter, in fact, even if I
If he had appeared earlier, he wouldn't have accomplished much in the first 3 chapters. It would be better to use it to foreshadow the situation to the extreme. Moreover, the two opponents, Li Xuanyang and Xuanyang Jun, also need to be designed with details (color, color) to make the readers interested.
hostility.
She: Although I say that, after reading the foreshadowing, we readers will only arouse a sense of expectation. If we can't catch up at this time, we will think it's watery. Because the foreshadowing and rendering part, after everyone reads it, the sense of anticipation is created
, but we mistakenly think that the part of "creating a sense of expectation" is useless. We don't study where our sense of expectation comes from (maybe it arises suddenly?)... You write like this, and I feel very happy when I read it continuously.
But readers who follow you will criticize that this is a disadvantage. The key is that it is very laborious for you to write like this, and it is not as good as "water dialogue". Anyway, this is the best water, and it is difficult for us to distinguish.
Me: If you suffer a loss, you will suffer a loss. When writing a book, you should first please yourself. If you are not happy yourself and do not believe in the story and the joys and sorrows, how can you hope that readers will be happy? If I can write about the characters in the book,
In a state of melting together, why worry about not being enthusiastic? I just want "water" to be difficult to write, and it takes a lot of effort to lay the groundwork, so there is no "water dialogue"! There is no technical content in that, and it is not challenging to write!
Her: Shabi, you deserve it!
I:……
(From the first day of writing the book, I understood that everyone is an individual with different thinking. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers, so in order to satisfy the impatient needs of some people who pursue "quickly knowing the outcome of the plot",
Therefore, it is not my way to write a flowing plot by neglecting polishing, foreshadowing, succession and continuity. Every reader will long for a different writing method and plot development. The way for a writer is to believe in himself and be in harmony with the characters in the book. I write
The book has been around for ten years. During this period, at least hundreds of readers have taught me how to write a book. I will refer to it, but I will not believe it.
With my approach, even if I sometimes suffer disadvantages, be disliked, and be misunderstood, I dare to say that I am not perfunctory in my daily updates.)
Having said so much, the [key point] is——
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