Chapter 289 Upgrade the hero
The script is written like this, pulling away from the distance, a city that looks like an old building in the 19th century appeared in front of you, followed by a faint sad music. Murong Lanluo, holding a camera, wandered on the streets, his breath was lazy and tired.
In the play, she is a female reporter who specializes in shooting scenery and recording beautiful moments in the city. She has been wandering for a long time and always wants to find an ambiguous Kang Chun, but in reality she has no choice. One day, Murong Bingyu has arrived in a new city and heard that there is a beautiful storm called "Fengqiao". Then, in order to fit the theme, she met the male protagonist Liao Xuebing here. The two knew each other and fell in love.
The plot is very pale, but Xiong Fei repeatedly emphasized that this is a romantic art film. It only requires a very beautiful picture. The music that listens to tears and the sad listeners have already succeeded most of the time. With the joining of big stars and the barely touching main clues of love, it is difficult not to sell.
Liao Xuebing saw a lot of lines he didn't like: "Screenwriter Xiong, you are thinking about it carefully. After the two rowed through the bridge hole of Fengqiao, the male protagonist affectionately said to the heroine, 'Love is the sun that raises hope in the morning, love is the breeze that blows through his heart', so stupid. You think it's a drama, saying this will only make the audience feel fake and disgusted."
Liao Xuebing is a Chinese teacher with rich reading experience. He is good at analyzing the plot promotion and psychological expression of characters' dialogues in the text, and points out what he thinks are inappropriate.
Xiong Fei's achievements were criticized and he was a little dissatisfied and said, "Then do you think you should change them, right? Then how do you change them?"
Sun Bo was talking with someone. When he heard the dispute, he opened the script and found the dialogue. He compared the plot before and after details and referenced it, and nodded repeatedly: "The protagonist said this, really doesn't fit the temperament we had pre-conceived. Xiong Fei, you'd better make a serious correction."
The director spoke, Xiong Fei had to think about it carefully, crossed out the passage with a pen, and said, "Let's do it like this, when you pass through the bridge hole, the two stared at each other, and the protagonist said, 'You are the most beautiful moment in my life'."
Director Ji and the producer didn't think Liao Xuebing could have any insights and said, "Just follow Xiong Fei's method."
Liao Xuebing had no choice but to spread the script in front of him: "Change the two identities, and replace the stingy and enthusiastic words with the heroine's words, and the hero's protagonist remained silent, so that would be great."
Several people looked at each other, and Xiong Fei simulated it carefully in his mind, and praised him: "It's amazing, why can't I think of it? This pairing is indeed much more vivid and specific, especially in line with the identities of the two in the play. Mr. Liao, you are really good."
This is a revision of details. Everyone in the crew often gathers ideas. Many people have their own unique way of understanding. Sun Bo just thought that his inspiration could not be better than the screenwriter just because of a revision.
"Cousin" was approved by others, and Murong Bingyu felt that she had some glory in her face. She finally didn't lose face and smiled and said, "Of course, my cousin is very talented."
Liao Xuebing said again: "This ending is too dull, and the heroine is the main perspective. In the end, she was recalled by the newspaper. The two broke up. They returned to their original place a year later, but they could no longer find the hero. They left only observation and reminiscence. It seemed to be long and long, but they were extremely irresponsible handlers."
"Oh, what are Mr. Liao's opinions?" The director didn't think what Liao Xuebing was like, but Xiong Fei didn't think so. There is a saying in literature that "one-character teacher". He has been immersed in the tip of his pen for ten years, so he naturally knows what seemingly simple changes mean to the changes in the article.
"Add a climax plot, the heroine went to Fengqiao to sulk, but heavy rain hit, the river water rose, Fengqiao was shaking, trapping her. At this time, the male protagonist appeared and rescued her, but she was swallowed by the raging river water."
Xiong Fei hesitated and said, "Will it become a tragedy? Will there be any audience who will watch the movies we made in the future?"
"What's wrong with sensationalism? In the end, the picture changed, and time jumped to decades. Fengqiao has been repaired. A voiceover said, 'In the past few decades, I haven't been thinking about him for a day', but the heroine's front has never appeared. How can such all kinds of love words make the audience moved? You are known as one of the four great talents in Yintian Gold Suit, and you can't write it?"
Xiong Fei said: "It seems okay, but the plot is greatly adjusted, and the production cost of Fengqiao is increasing again. Director Sun will not agree." Before he finished speaking, Sun Bo shouted loudly: "Yes! I always think the film is too dull, as if there is a lack of some flavor, but I can't remember it. Yes, it's too correct, it's best to change it to a tragic ending. Isn't "Titanic" successful like this? Miss Bingyu, your cousin is simply a genius."
The producer couldn't understand the taste and said silly: "The cost has increased, will Mr. Lao agree?"
"Add a little more cost, but the chance of box office guarantee is greater than before. Isn't this what you businessmen love to do the most?"
"Director Sun, you are a big director. I will listen to you. You can see that adding this plot will add millions. It is best to list the detailed budget expenses, so I can report to General Labor."
The first revision opinion can be said to be accidental, but the second opinion may explain the extraordinaryness of Liao Xuebing, and everyone looked at him with admiration.
Xiong Fei's screenwriter skills are remarkable. Apart from two shortcomings, no other flaws can be found.
Sun Bo said: "The opening ceremony was held last time, but this time it was completely reshooted, so we can create new gimmicks. In the press conference three days later, please be sure to be present. The media are very interested in your identity. If you have time, I would like to ask some professionals to train you. What should you say and what shouldn't be said in that occasion should be paid great attention to, and you must not let tricky reporters seize the handle. We are considering whether to promote your cousin relationship with Miss Bingyu. This matter is both beneficial and ugly. Just imagine that Murong Bingyu and her cousin will play the couple in the play in a double role. It is simply a super selling point, but some people will not like this relationship, and may even be the target of attack."
Bingyu's agent Xu Yan knew that the two were not cousins at all, so he said, "I think it's a big deal. I don't remember the last time I started the filming. Many fans were very dissatisfied, saying that Yuan Shaowu's role as the male lead defiled the goddess in their minds, and crazy fans sent blood books to threaten us, which scared us. This time it was Bingyu's cousin, which was completely acceptable to everyone. They felt that it was not a problem for cousins to be intimate with each other, and they would only focus on the film itself."
"Well, then we will promote it as much as possible."
The agent thought to himself: "The last time the singer was not present, Bingyu was depressed by Jinghetian, this is Mr. Liao, who is really excellent. No wonder Miss Bingxue is so fascinated by him."
Because Liao Xuebing's role is very important, the director dared not look down on it and said, "In terms of film remuneration, because the cost of the film is not high, it is about 500,000 yuan. If it becomes popular, it may be ten times or a hundred times today. Does Mr. Liao have an agent? This drama needs to be signed, and it is better to form a binding force with legal effect. Everyone can do their best to perform their respective duties, right?"
"I don't have an agent, but I am Bingyu's cousin, and her agent is my agent."
Xu Yan was overjoyed: "Mr. Liao is sure? Then I will go back and plan a brokerage contract, which will guarantee that it will maximize your interests."
The drama appointment was signed with the platemaker Lao Langming, and Sun Bo was not in a hurry. Several people discussed some other matters and explained the precautions. Liao Xuebing said goodbye.
When he arrived at the school in the afternoon, Song Yuhao remembered Liao Xuebing's words after the exam and asked him to make fun. He clamored to fulfill his promise. Old Liao was on a whim and said, "Okay, tonight, Yuyu Qionglou, see you all."
After writing a lecture notes for half an hour, Gong Xuelin conducted a routine inspection, accusing the office of poor hygiene conditions, the people of scattered discipline, and the midterm exam results were discussed. This class was not good, and the class did not improve. She ranked and criticized her head teachers such as Jiang Feng and Lu Chengda, which made Jiang Feng's faceless person in his forties.
When he arrived at Liao Xuebing, before she could speak, Lao Liao glared: "Minister Gong, do you have anything to say? Are you planning to give a bonus? If there is no bonus, please leave as soon as possible and don't interfere with our normal work."
Jiang Feng was sweating coldly and thought to himself: "Isn't Liao Xuebing seeking death? He dares to act arrogantly when he meets that witch, and he is 80% tired of living."
"What's your attitude?" Gong Xuelin's eyebrows were raised.
"Don't forget what you said before the exam. Do I know in my heart? If you don't want to be untrustworthy, just say less. Let's do this. In a few days, I'll buy a few covers for you to recall your youth that you have lost for fifty years. How about it?" He used his hand to touch his breasts with a vulgar action.
Gong Xuelin was smoking after seven orifices. Knowing that this hooligan couldn't get a good deal, she said coldly: "You can't just judge students with your grades. Classroom discipline and student quality are also important. Next week's meeting of all faculty and staff, the exercise of the Luxury Death Voice is linked to the salary of the class teacher, and will be put on the board agenda." After saying that, Leather left thumped.
Jiang Feng Daqi: "What have you told the witch before? Her look of getting angry but not being able to make a comeback is really relieved, but you have to pay attention to her revenge."
"The soldiers come and the generals stop them, and the water comes and the soil is flooded. What can I do if I can't handle?"
Chapter completed!