First, let me talk about my shortcomings first. As a novice, I still have many shortcomings in writing, which must be admitted, but I have been working hard to improve, hoping to write better things. At the same time, I hope that sincere readers will give you your valuable opinions and make me progress faster!

Second, regarding the symbols in this article, I must explain this for a series of periods. Because of the different texts, the symbols that were originally ellipses turned into periods when copied onto the text of Creation on my document. They have been completely changed. I hope everyone can watch them again.

There is also an exclamation mark. When I was writing the article, I was fully devoted to it and was deeply involved in the nervous division. I unconsciously used too many exclamation marks, all to highlight the tension of the atmosphere at that time. I am sorry for this point. I have made changes now. I hope everyone will read it in a review manner again!

Third, regarding grammar, I have comments on my writing style, but I have been persisting and improving it. What I like most is the use of words, such as adjective verbs and static adjectives, and I hope that they can have better results. I think readers who really like this book will definitely experience it after reading it carefully, but some SBs are always arrogant and look very knowledgeable, and cursing. Even if he is talking about some real feelings, it will make me unable to follow! In fact, he is a scum among readers.

Fourth, regarding the introduction, some say good, some say bad, some say very interesting, some say it's useless. For this point, I have been looking for a way to satisfy two kinds of people, but there is no progress. Personally, I think my introduction is still very interesting and indispensable. The introduction has a great effect. He mentioned Bao Bei's father led him to join the army and wrote about the reason why he later had a certain physical fitness. When talking about his mother, he understood the origin of the dramatic name Bao Bei. When talking about his previous life, it was not only to add a label of time travel and reincarnation to this article, but also to highlight the huge differences between the protagonists and the meaning of the title of the book dandy! As for some flowing rhythms, it is entirely to allow readers to enter the theme of this article as soon as possible, because I also want to try to bring away some of the foreshadowing in the early stage!

Fifth, regarding dialect, there are only some of the previous chapters for dialects, which will attract some people, but I won’t use one trick more, as it will make people bored if I use it too much. Moreover, dialects have certain meanings. It can highlight the slow transformation from Bao Bei to this life. Please understand this carefully!

Sixth, again, my article is not determined by thinking about it. This is my idea of ​​a novel over the years. It has cost me a lot of thought. Please don’t insult you want. If you like it, of course you welcome it. If you don’t like it, you can leave some pertinent opinions. I will also learn humbly, but please don’t judge casually by those who don’t read it well or even don’t read it carefully, because you are “unworthy”! Writers also have the pride of writers. Although many writers are vulgar among writers, we also have our own intentions and our own efforts. We hope that readers will recognize and advise, but we are not completely used to make money to show off our arrogant people!

Again, all readers who like me, please leave your precious sincere comments after reading them. This is eager for me. My progress is my efforts and everyone’s help!

Finally, I love you very much, my loyal readers!

Sincerely

salute
Chapter completed!