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Today I spent some effort to overhaul the previous chapters of this book, which are densely populated with poisonous points.
Chapter 1 and 2 modified some minor problems in word selection and sentence making, and reinterpreted the system, time and space and other factors.
Chapter 3: I modified the unreasonable classroom to get angry, and it was changed to a conflict caused by being late. (Forgive me for not going to college, I'm sorry everyone)
Chapter 4 modified the unreasonable meme of the nurse wearing high heels, and also changed the use of some words.
The fifth and sixth are not modified.
Chapter 7 modified the conflict between the rich second generation and the protagonist, eased the conflict and modified the routine.
Chapter 8 +1, the conflict is gentle and not that sharp.
Chapter 9, Chapter 10, revised the word selection and sentence creation.
The above is a summary of the entire content of the modification.
The second thing:
I should have explained the feelings while being lousy several times, and I have explained the comments on the shelves once.
Because I am affectionate with the heroine and have sex with her, this setting cannot be modified, otherwise the whole text will have to be pushed back and started over.
The heroine's setting is indeed a big mistake for me, I'm sorry everyone!
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The above is everyone’s encouragement to me, thank you everyone!
This comment will be deleted tomorrow morning!
ps: Let me talk about the update problem. With the best of my ability, I will keep it 3 to 4 every day.
Also, it's about adding updates, it will definitely be finished.
Chapter completed!