Chapter 744 The irreversible difference
Although there is a movie plot as a reference, it is a visual image after all.
What Zhang Chu has to do now is to transform the picture into words, how to set off the surrounding environment, how the characters look like, and what their expressions and motivations they speak must be explained clearly.
In fact, his writing is not 100% copying the content of the movie, but adapting it to a certain extent.
In the final analysis, "Artificial Intelligence" is just a short story. If it is written all according to the plot of the movie, it will be derived from a long story of 200,000 to 300,000 words.
The story is actually very full, and some parts of it need to be detailed and appropriate. Zhang Chu is not sure if he can finish it within 20,000 words!
"It seems like I've dug a hole for myself and wrote a short story. This is a trend towards the middle chapter."
After writing the three thousand words, he looked back and found that the plot had not yet advanced until David was abandoned.
Now that Henry and Monica's son Martin have just woken up, he has to stop and think about the following sentences, because the next one is a very cruel comparison!
From the initial treasure in my mother's eyes to the loss of all the attention in the future, David wanted to win back his attention.
The plot must be well portrayed so that the story can be more intense and exciting and the readers will not be too boring.
Martin aroused David to eat spinach and caused the line to be damaged. David and Martin fell into the swimming pool at the same time and David was abandoned. These are places where emotions burst out!
If you can't write these things well, then your emotional expression will be worse, and you won't be able to see how touching it is later.
He always wrote a long passage, then shook his head and deleted it. He always felt that this did not describe the tragic contrast. Even if the robot looks similar to humans, it is essentially very different!
"It's better to be a copywriter honestly. It's too much trouble now." Zhang Chu covered his head and was worried. He wanted to write a book before the last final exam to relax.
But I used so much brain power and many brain cells were killed.
In the blink of an eye, his stomach was so hungry that he was roaring, but he didn't want to get up to cook. Instead, he opened the takeaway software on his mobile phone and chose a Maocai to deliver it.
In winter, hot and spicy mao dishes are a very good choice.
After ordering the takeaway, Zhang Chu put his phone aside and he continued to think about the plot.
Now, after writing a few sentences from time to time, you enter the space of the Savior system to watch the movie. Through various details and watching the clip repeatedly, you can determine whether you want to express the meaning of this plot!
Fortunately, he has a system that can be used to refer to, otherwise it would be possible to remember the name and the main plot if it is entirely based on memory.
Sometimes writing is like that. I always feel that something is wrong with what I write, but after revising it, I find that the original version is actually the most suitable one.
This is the case now. Zhang Chu is confused about these details, constantly overturning and starting over again, and then looking at the historical version of the document, he found that the most suitable one had already appeared.
Caven may last for a long time, but if overcome, it will be smooth sailing and thoughts will flow like a spring!
Within thirty minutes from ordering to delivery, he actually wrote about two thousand words in one breath.
After temporarily saving the document, Zhang Chu came to the dining table in the living room to open the steaming takeaway package.
He knew that ordering takeout for a long time was not a good choice, but now it seems that there is no other way.
"Before the winter vacation, I'll buy the villa. At that time, I'll hire a special aunt to cook and clean."
Zhang Chu must be unwilling to clean such a large villa. Now, the three-bedroom and one-living houses are people from cleaning companies every week.
At that time, the aunt only needs to keep it clean and hygienic. Ask the labor company to complete the specific cleaning, otherwise the workload will definitely be very large!
Thinking of this, Zhang Chu couldn't help but laugh. He was also a family member of Yanjing, so he dared not think about it in his previous life.
Fitness is just to be able to eat and drink, and he doesn't want to become a muscular man like Schwarzenegger, so Zhang Chu took out a bottle of iced fat house happy water from the refrigerator, which felt like it was a world of ice and fire.
He really wanted to cook hot pot at home, but the taste of that thing was too big. The room with poor exhaust system might have to remain for a long time.
After having takeout, he looked at his phone at 8 o'clock in the evening. Perhaps in the early morning he could pass the "Artificial Intelligence" onto the Weibo.
There has been a lot less news about him on the Internet in recent days. Norwegian forests have revenue of 350 million yuan. Detective Sherlock is time-sensitive and has been replaced by other news, movies, and gossip.
No one can always take the attention, this is a rapidly changing era!
Just after he took the takeaway packaging box into the trash can in the corridor, he actually received the one sent by Chen Muyang and had already made it. Do you want to take a look at the effect?"
During the annual writers' performance, Chen Muyang had just returned from Norway, and his agency spent a huge amount of money to shoot on-site in the real Norwegian forest.
It’s just that I have been editing and post-production all the time. There will be no reporters or passers-by in such remote places, so it’s very good to keep the Internet confidentiality very much.
Zhang Chu thought for a while and said in voice: "You send the video to my email address, I'll take a look on the computer."
He has never been used to watching videos on his mobile phone screen, and the iPad is already the limit!
Chen Muyang quickly replied: "No problem, I'll send it to you now. If you have any comments, please tell me in advance. I'll release this mv on time at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning. I hope it can stimulate clicks and make "Norwegian Forest" the first place in the hot list."
"Then you have to look at it first. You should be able to win a championship."
When Zhang Chu returned to the study, he was not in a hurry to write a book, but planned to take a look at this few minutes of mv to let himself eat.
The distant and quiet forest was covered with misty smoke, and the whole earth looked snow-white.
The winding coastline, steep fjords and lush forest landscapes covered with snow have combined to turn Norway into a veritable forest country.
Winter is not the best season to go to Norwegian forests. Here, it is frozen and snowy, and it looks lonely.
But with the singing and snowflakes, it looks very suitable!
It seems to be isolated from the world, and it is particularly quiet, and the appearance of the aurora at night makes the whole video a little more erratic.
After Zhang Chu read this mv, he replied to Chen Muyang with a few words on WeChat: "Very great!"
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