Chapter 162 The perfect work
"It's only 75 points, it's a bit low for him."
Ma Qiwei said regretfully that he had high expectations for Zhang Chu. Such an essay contest can only be considered excellent if it reaches more than 80 points.
Regarding this future student, Ma Qiwei did not think about helping with love, but wanted to make some favors.
Chen Yingsong replied with a stare and said, "Tao? This score is no longer low, mainly because his book is about the life, religion, etc. of Indian teenagers, and the plot is slow, and I am a non-believer, so I cannot understand the religious content he described."
He waved his hand, "Forget it, you guys continue to talk. I have to hurry up and finish reading this book. I always feel that I lack anything if I don't finish reading it."
"You old guy, go quickly. After get off work, I will ask Director Deng if I can borrow Zhang Chu's book to the hotel to check it out."
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When he returned to the judges' room, Chen Yingsong didn't care about rest. He heard that other groups had read so many works and had not finished reading the first novel here. He had to hurry up.
In the subsequent content, he saw an extremely real picture of a young man who was surviving, whether it was his face when he saw the lifeboat when he was hungry for a long time, or his thank you after stuffing biscuits into his mouth.
These all look particularly real, especially the materials on the ship are more accurate, as if they have checked them out on the spot, anti-seasy pills, canned fresh water, compressed biscuits, wool blankets, solar stills, life jackets and whistles, manual flares...
[The coming death is already terrible enough, but worse, death is still a while before it comes, during which all the happiness you once had and all the happiness you might have become so precious that you watch very clearly as you are losing everything.]
The despair of this Indian boy was revealed between the lines, and the shadow of death enveloped him.
Fortunately, Richard Parker is here, this tiger is both a threat, a companionship, and a spur!
Chen Yingsong didn’t expect that the plot of drifting on the Pacific Ocean would be so long and so specific, and the fantasy drifting was agreed upon!
It doesn't look fantastic at all, but it looks like a textbook on shipwreck survival.
However, this part of the content is described by the school in the first person, without the author's annotation and observation, and it is completed in one go, with ups and downs and very smooth.
This content of nearly 100,000 words is full of all the dangers and obstacles that can be encountered in survival at sea: on a stormy night with lightning and lightning, sharks and whales try to knock over the lifeboat, and the passing giant ships not only miss the signal of the lifeboat, but also almost flood the boat.
In this part of the content, Zhang Chu has many strokes of his creation, describing the sea, the sky, the clouds, the underwater world, and those upside-down cities full of various lives, all appear vividly in his writing.
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Chen Yingsong was enjoying it. At this time, he felt that the 75 points he gave was indeed a little low. Judging from the current content, it should be able to rise to 85 points!
The sounds from the outside could not affect his reading, but at this time a magical island made him think deeply.
Although there are all kinds of wonders in the vast world, the vast Pacific Ocean is actually in a magical island full of swamps!
The plants on the island can fill his stomach, and those who can't run are Richard Parker's delicacies, but Richard Parker returns to the lifeboat every night, which makes Pi very surprised.
Finally, Pi saw a pair of 32 adult teeth wrapped in leaves on the big tree. He suddenly realized that this was a man-cannibal island. Every night, the lake water on the island would digest the nearby animals!
Chen Yingsong suddenly felt that this island should have a different meaning and was by no means an ideal paradise.
As expected, Pai resolutely escaped from the island as Chen Yingsong thought. It was precisely because of this action that Chen Yingsong looked at him a little.
[I climbed down from the side of the boat and didn't dare let it go. I was so close to being rescued, but I was afraid that I would drown in these two feet deep sea water. I looked up to see how far it was. This raised me to see the last side of Richard Parker, because it was that moment he jumped over me...
At that moment I was sure that he would look back and finish his ears, he would yell, but he didn't act like this at all. His eyes were staring at the jungle, and then he jumped forward, and disappeared from my life forever.]
Finally saved!
Chen Ying sighed relieved. She was saved in the Gulf of Mexico and came to visit the hospital to take care of her. The structure was quite complete.
But there are several pages of contents at the end, which makes him quite curious. What other stories can the Sect tell after being saved?
When Chen Yingsong saw this, he was completely surprised!
In the last part, facing the suspicion and interrogation of the investigator, the team told the story of the fantasy drifting in him, but they did not believe it.
So Pi told another story, there were no hyenas, no orangutans, no tigers and zebras in this story.
When the freighter just sank, there were four people on the lifeboat, a Chinese sailor with a broken leg, a French chef cooking on the freighter, and Pi and his mother.
But in front of Pi, the chef first killed and ate the sailor, and then killed Pi's mother. In the end, Pi was survived. You can imagine the end of the chef.
The story was told with the two ris' horrified expressions. Chen Yingsong couldn't help but feel cold after reading it!
Until the last so-called second story was eliminated, the past plot flashed in my mind, and all the previous quips without meaning were foreshadows, making the whole story integrated and connected.
Break the fantasy adventure story full of harmony and love before, and present a somewhat cruel and ruthless bloody story before your eyes!
Which story is true?
Chen Yingsong had a vague answer in his heart. No wonder he had to choose those four animals. It turned out that each of them had its own meaning.
"This Zhang Chu is really amazing! It's too little to give 100 points!"
The two stories represent the good and evil aspects of human nature. Although they are unacceptable cruel facts, they have already suggested countless times in the process of telling the first story that the second story may be the real one.
But in the end, the two investigators chose to believe the first story.
In everyone's heart, there is a Richard Parker. It will roar out of the cage when in danger, but will depend on others for their own life.
There is a tiger in my heart, and I sniff the roses carefully.
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The 350-monthly ticket is updated, and the author still owes the last chapter of the monthly ticket to update.
Chapter completed!