Fan Keqin continued: "If you use lies to verify lies, you will definitely get lies. So whether it is life or justice that is verified under conspiracy, is it really justice? If Director Zhan wants to express something similar

If I think about it, I think this door is still too abrupt. There is no prefix at all in the whole article. It just comes suddenly at the end, which is a bit too...dry. It feels very reckless. This is my opinion.

, I hope Director Zhan doesn’t mind.”

The company boss Zhang Shan was a little surprised, because he really didn't know that Fan Keqin knew about movies. Anyway, he knew better than himself. Before this, he had actually read the script of Dead Game, and he thought it was quite interesting. But at this time

As soon as I heard Fan Keqin finish speaking, I felt, well, that seems to be what happened.

Zhan Ruide digested it for a while, and after Fan Keqin finished speaking, he did feel quite uncomfortable. After all, he made the script himself, and now being said like this, he naturally felt uncomfortable. But for the same reason, this guy is a very pure person

The director really wanted to make a good film, so he asked: "This script has not been completely finalized yet. Teacher Wan, can you give me more specific opinions on how you think it should be changed? In other words, is it

In which direction should we change?"

Fan Keqin observed the other party's expression, and he understood that Zhan Ruide seemed to be asking him for advice humbly. So he lit a cigarette, thought for a while, and said: "First of all, we must set the general tone of the story. I think the dead end book,

There is no problem in terms of concept. There is some humanistic thinking mixed into the conspiracy. And the setting of the confined space can be completely retained. This is a genius idea.

But the way the characters appear can be modified. After all, the movie Director Zhan wants is a horror-type movie. So how can we catch people's attention in the first place and make the audience have a sense of involvement? It is not important. I

I think we can reset the way the characters appear.

For example, the doctor and the detective woke up in the water room of a closed, abandoned slaughterhouse. One was on the far left side of the room, and the other was on the far right side of the room. But when they woke up, they found that they were being held captive by metal chains.

, completely locked. Then, they found a corpse lying face down on the floor in the middle of the water room with a hole in its head. A revolver was not far from the right hand of the corpse.

As soon as it opens, it will completely catch the audience's attention and give the audience an excellent sense of immersion..."

Fan Keqin talked about the settings and modifications at the beginning. Zhan Ruide's eyes lit up and he nodded repeatedly, saying: "Yes, that's good. After all, this is a thriller and horror film, and the beginning is very important. This is indeed very attractive, but Teacher Wan

The murderer was deleted and turned into a confrontation between two 'good guys'. Well, it's more interesting this way. But without one person, the plot will probably be weaker due to convenience."

"No." Fan Keqin said: "We can set up various links throughout the film to arouse the audience's emotions. In addition, I did not delete the murderer, he still exists."

"Ah?" Zhan Rednahan said: "Oh, by the way, there is a dead man on the ground, so there is a murderer outside this water house. I don't know when he will come in, right? This is more conducive to suspense.

manufacture."

"Hey!" How should I put it? Fan Keqin felt that the other party's thinking was indeed okay. But the movie he was talking about turned into two completely different stories. How could that be possible? If not, his own soundtrack would be okay.

There was no way to copy the original version. Therefore, Fan Keqin began to follow the temptation and said: "No, actually, this murderer is the dead man with a blooming brain. He gave himself a tranquilizer to make his heartbeat and pulse beat more clearly.

Very weak.

However, I can see from your reaction that the modification was successful if I set it up this way. Because you didn’t guess it, it’s naturally impossible for the audience to guess it either.

My idea is that after this scene is shown at the beginning of the movie, the two people who were locked up began to introduce themselves to each other and tried to find a way out. Then various hints and clues were set up in this closed space. The two people

Assisting each other, discussing with each other, and through clues, it seems that they have been actively looking for a way to really get out..."

That's right, the script Fan Keqin mentioned is actually a series of horror thrillers that will become very famous in later generations, called Saw. This horror film is absolutely famous among horror film fans. It has all kinds of suspense and clues.

, the conflict, the rhythm, and the final big twist will definitely make horror movie lovers scream for excitement.

The script is a three-part structure that is a collection of commercial films. It was also the best commercial film narrative structure summarized by the world until Fan Keqin traveled through time in later generations. In each paragraph, there must be ups and downs. Therefore, Fan Keqin just summarized the general

After the plot was narrated and finally finished, Zhan Reid was already very excited. Although the script seemed to have been changed beyond recognition, it was undoubtedly more exciting to film it as Fan Keqin said. In addition, the basic settings are still the same.

It's your own creativity.

He was like this, let alone Zhang Shan. After listening to it, I felt so comfortable. Good! Good! My company is indeed about to turn around. After Fan Keqin finished speaking, Zhan Ruide had already taken the pen and paper.

, while discussing with Fan Keqin to fill in the content of each segment, such as what kind of clues should be given to several people in the story. Then after discovering the clues, how to create suspense, etc.

In the end, Zhang Shan heard two people discussing and using electric speakers and gramophones to completely create a murderer with a very strong IQ. Finally, he closed the door. When the game ended, the feeling was simply thrilling.

After the discussion was over, Zhan Ruide also showed a smile on his face and said: "I really appreciate Teacher Wan's guidance. I have learned a lot, and there are still some details that need to be solved. I will go back and revise them carefully. I believe it will be completed in a few days.

I’ll trouble Teacher Wan again when the time comes.”

"I don't dare to take it seriously." Fan Keqin said with a smile: "If you need it, come to me anytime."

"Okay, then I won't disturb Teacher Wan." Zhan Ruide said and stood up. Only then did he remember that the company's boss Zhang Shan was still there. So he said: "Boss, can you send a car to take me back?
Chapter completed!