A lot of things have happened recently. There are many problems in the book "Sword Girl", which makes many readers feel very uncomfortable. Here, the author will review it and list some of the main problems pointed out by many readers. I would like to use this chapter to let the author reflect on himself.

Question 1: Water: This problem is an eternal problem. Since the book was put on the shelves, readers have constantly pointed out that the author is very watery. From a reader's perspective, this novel is indeed a bit watery, but the author swears to the sky that the author has absolutely no idea of ​​taking the initiative to inject water, because the words that promote the plot are the best words to write. If there is no detailed description of the whole plot, the author can write 3,000 words in one hour, instead of a maximum of 1,500 words in one hour like now.

The main problem of this problem is the author Jun's writing style, which is the long-winded problem that readers often point out. They like to write a thing thoroughly, so they will use a lot of explanatory words. In addition, there are also issues that like to describe some details. The author Jun likes to describe some details in language to express some interesting little jokes, but the result seems a bit unpleasant.

The author has begun to consciously control the above two points, and everyone can look forward to the subsequent changes.

Question 2: The problem of double opening: In fact, at this time, the author has deeply regretted whether to do double opening.

The reason why the double-opening was at the beginning was because of the explosive results of "Sword Girl", which made the author very disappointed and tried to write a new novel to open up a new situation. But the facts show that the author did not have this ability, but instead caused all kinds of shortcomings in both novels, and many readers have deeply criticized this.

But the author of the book "The Witch's Guide to Krypton Gold" has already promised those readers that they will give the book an ending and will no longer be directly eunuch like the previous "My Universe Dynasty". The author can only hold on, but his main energy will be all focused on "Sword Girl".

Question 3: The problem between women's clothing and Guxuanyuan: This is purely the author's imagination for a while, and the instigation of some women's clothing bosses in the reader group. After this plot has passed, Guhan will reappear and Guxuanyuan will disappear. According to the outline, Guxuanyuan will appear several times in the future. The author does not want to destroy the outline he has written, so the author sincerely hopes that all readers can understand the author and just cultivate the hobby of women's clothing... The author promises everyone that Guxuanyuan will never have any plots that disgusting everyone.

Question 4: The problem of Gu Han's IQ decrease: This is also a fact, but there are some objective reasons. At the beginning, there are not many settings, and there are not many characters related to the protagonist. The protagonist can do many things very freely. But once the book reaches the later stage, some plots are no longer controlled by the author. For various reasons, Gu Han can no longer do many things as he pleases, so Gu Han will appear to have a decrease in IQ, which is because the author's ability to control the plot is insufficient, and the author is also very distressed.

Question 5: The plot is very biased: this author directly denied that all the plots are still under the control of the author, and the story is still within the outline, so just ignore this issue.

Question 6: The lack of supporting characters: This is also a very big problem. The most obvious one is the Bapoly and the Egyptian gods. These three supporting characters have not appeared for hundreds of chapters. The author will not tell all readers. The author has completely forgotten the existence of these supporting characters for a while... Well, the author is trying hard to find a way to get back to this point, and will give you a reasonable explanation in the future.

Question 7: Yuan Kou’s strength and character problem: There is no need to say much about this. Yuan Kou’s strength must be compressed and changed according to the example of the entire worldview. It must not be completely relied on the description in the original work, otherwise the earth will be destroyed hundreds of times. There is also Yuan Kou’s character problem. You must know that it takes a lot of energy to write a character’s character completely. The author has no such energy because of double openings and other reasons.

But I believe this will get better after the double opening is over.

Question 8: Who is the heroine: Answer ·Liu Nian Lin

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The author can admit this without denying it, but the author is definitely not unwilling to accept criticism, but I just hope that your criticism can be more direct.

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Finally, thank you all readers for your support!
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