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The summer rain did not cool down the weather, but instead seemed even more stuffy. Chen Fan, who left the single ward, was sweating profusely. The sweat eroded the wound on his head, making the wound very uncomfortable.

Luo Hao grinned and smiled. He seemed very happy when he came today. This kid arrived early in the morning and was not behind the account dealers who lined up to register. When he came, he was very happy to see Chen Fan writing the manuscript. After grabbing Chen Fan's new manuscript, he refused to let go. He did not accompany Chen Fan to clean up and discharge the hospital after reading it all.

"Chen Fan, don't say that the novel you wrote is so beautiful, it just has one disadvantage, it's not enough to feel refreshed! I feel that the protagonist you set is a bit cowardly! Look, since the protagonist's senior suppresses him, he can hit him backhand, and you have to have a degree to abuse your master. If you always suppress it, readers will definitely not like it..."

After reading Chen Fanxin's manuscript, Luo Hao began to suggest it, as if he was a novel expert, but Chen Fan ignored it, so he didn't care what readers thought. He didn't care if he didn't have a reader. Everything on the manuscript really happened to him in another world. If Chen Fan really had a backhand attack as Luo Hao said at that time, he would definitely not have lived long. His strength was still very weak at that time, and it was not enough to challenge the senior's authority.

The competition between magicians is not like the academic world in this world. Just let go of the mouth. In that world, there are not only duels between knights, but also magicians. Moreover, the tragic level of magicians' gladiator is even more tragic than the knight's battle.

In the world Chen Fan travels through, magicians are not weak. They can also exercise their bodies and practice martial arts. Some mages do not hold staff but carry big swords when fighting! It is difficult for a mage with a fragile body to survive while taking risks. Perhaps only mages who are purely engaged in academic research do not care about physical exercise.

The battle between knights is at most a sword. Even if you lose a good armor, you can save your life. However, it is not that simple after being hit by magic. If the opponent uses magic with huge lethality, it is already lucky to be able to leave a corpse after being killed!

Chen Fan ignored Luo Hao's nagging and said, "Let's go and accompany me to get my hair clean. I feel that my hair is in trouble when I leave the air conditioner."

"Hey, have you listened to me? What do you think of my suggestions?" Luo Hao still refused to give in, as if I wanted to transfer you to a master writer.

"The suggestion is pretty good, but I won't write that way." Chen Fan first praised Luo Hao, and then rejected him, so that he would not undermine the enthusiasm of his friends.

"Why? With my countless experience in reading books, these are the secrets for the great gods' success!" Luo Hao was a little anxious. He thought last night that he did not have the talent to become a great god, but becoming a great god's buddy is also a very glorious thing!

Chen Fan looked at the drizzle outside and said, "I don't want to be a great god. I just want to write the books I am willing to write. If you think it's not good, I won't give you the manuscript below."

When Luo Hao heard this, he immediately said: "No, no, no, no. We good brothers, you can't treat me like this!" Luo Hao is now fascinated by Chen Fan's manuscript. Although he has made a lot of suggestions, he also hopes that Chen Fan can write it well. If Chen Fan doesn't show him the manuscript, he probably won't be able to sleep at night and think about the following plot. In layman's terms, Luo Hao has now become a fan of Chen Fan's manuscripts.

"By the way, I forgot to tell you. I've read your novel to my friends. Guess what they said?" Luo Hao said with a smug smile. He came early in the morning and was just looking for Chen Fan's manuscript to read, and before he could share the joy of slapping netizens in the face last night.

Chen Fan looked at him and walked to the barber shop next to the hospital inpatient department, looking uninterested. Luo Hao only felt an impulse in his heart that he could not express it. He scratched his ears and foreheads in a hurry. Chen Fan didn't say anything, and he kept what he wanted to say next. He looked at Chen Fan pitifully. This was like crosstalk, no one talked, and he always felt that there was something missing when he said alone.

Seeing Luo Hao's appearance, Chen Fan smiled and decided not to tease him. He asked, "What do your friend say?"

Luo Hao immediately became arrogant and his face became very proud. Looking at Luo Hao who was unscheming, Chen Fan felt a warm feeling in his heart, which was a long-lost feeling.

"Haha! I felt so good last night! Let me tell you in detail..."

When Chen Fan heard this, he couldn't help but tease and said, "Did you go to a romantic place last night because of your love, and explained your virginity to your love last night?"

"Get out! I'm not a virgin anymore!" Luo Hao waved his hand and said a little annoyed: "You heard that I thought what happened last night was even more enjoyable than doing that! Do you listen to it?"

"You said! You said!" Chen Fan smiled.

Then Luo Hao told Chen Fan about his experience in the group last night, and recorded his expression at this time as annotation for the idiom Mei Fei Se Wu.

Last night, Luo Hao was first mocked for the middle of the night, but when he posted Chen Fan's novel online, the atmosphere in the group changed. The news in the group asked for the following text was directly flooded, and the private chats he gave him were one after another. This kind of pleasure of turning over as the master made him sleepless in the middle of the night.

Faced with the urging of the people in the group, he said something he thought was very nice in the group: "If you want to read a book, don't talk nonsense to me! The manuscript of this book is only in my hands. I want to read the follow-up to see my mood!"

As soon as this news was released, the sound of flattery below made Luo Hao feel relieved. Of course, some people questioned that Luo Hao was building momentum for his book.

Luo Hao posted another sentence he thought was very domineering: "Do you think a book written so well needs to be promoted like this?! There is a problem with your brain!!!"

His words immediately attracted the consent of those in the group who were attracted by Chen Fan's manuscript, and the following agreed to it.

There are not all voices of agreement in these news. Some people say, "This book is too abusive and unhappy to read."

Judging from the eyes of online novels, this book is indeed a bit abusive, but the sound was quickly overwhelmed by the admirable news.

After reading the novel, the people in the group had questions about the plot in the manuscript like Luo Hao. At this time, Luo Hao became an expert and answered the questions of the people in the group one by one. Of course, the answers he gave to others were all his own understanding, and he didn't know Chen Fan's true thoughts.

It was not until the second half of the night that all the guys in the group had rested. Luo Hao turned off the computer and lay on the bed. He tossed and turned for a long time before falling asleep.

Listening to Luo Hao's exaggerated description, Chen Fan burst into laughter and said, "Have you sent my manuscript online?"

"I have agreed with you. That guy in the group is my friend." Luo Hao said heartlessly.

"Okay, it's okay." Chen Fan said while pushing open the door of the barber shop. The barber was busy. The barber shop business mainly faced patients in the hospital department. It was not surprising to see the gauze on Chen Fan's head, and they signaled Chen Fan to sit down.

Chen Fan sat on the sofa in the barber shop, and Luo Hao quickly sat down.

"Or you go to Yunqi to post a book." Luo Hao suggested. Yundian is a place where online writers can prove their truth. Whether they can become a great god depends on Yundian's achievements. Luo Hao is determined to make Chen Fan a great Internet master.

"Why do I feel that you are more active than me?" Chen Fan asked with a smile.

Luo Hao thrust his waist and said, "Of course, it feels so good to have a master in the online literature industry as his brother!"

Looking at Luo Hao's look of anticipation, Chen Fan nodded and said, "Okay, I'll do it when I go back tonight!" Chen Fan was not interested in becoming a great god in the online novel industry. He just couldn't bear to see his only friend disappointed. Moreover, Luo Hao had already posted the manuscript online, so it didn't matter if he posted it on Yundian.

Luo Hao patted Chen Fan on the shoulder and laughed, which attracted the barber beside him to look at him.

"Will you change the book when it is posted to the starting point? The reader is God when it is posted to the Internet!"

Luo Hao also mentioned the topic of revising books. As a senior online bookworm, he understood that only cool articles can become popular online. Isn’t there such a saying? If the four ancient classics are placed on the clouds with the situation of online literature, these four books may not necessarily become popular, but you can’t say that the four classics are not good books... It can be seen that the special nature of the online literature industry.

Chen Fan shook his head. The manuscript was his personal experience, and he would definitely not change it. After thinking for a moment, he thought of a statement to dispel Luo Hao's idea: "Have you read all the divine books on the Internet?"

"Of course! I have read some more than once!" This is like the leveling process of bookworms. You have to read the online divine books once before you can call yourself a senior.

"Then let me ask you, why do those books become divine books?" Chen Fan continued to ask.

Luo Hao thought about it for a while but couldn't figure out the reason. He had read those books, and it was indeed better. He couldn't think of the answer and could only shake his head.

Chen Fan smiled slightly and said, "Books can become magical books in two ways. One is to create a genre, and the other is to control the hearts of readers."

"Yes, yes, you're right." Luo Hao suddenly realized when he heard Chen Fan say this, "Actually, I think so too, but I haven't found the right words to express it! Chen Fan doesn't blame you for being able to write books, I can only read books, this is the gap!"

Writing books, especially writing online novels, is actually a world. The author creates a novel world that readers have never heard of and presents this world to them. This is one aspect that attracts readers; the other aspect is what Luo Hao said to make readers feel refreshed and make their emotions change with the plot and characters in the book. Of course, both aspects require the author to have a certain amount of writing support, otherwise even if the creativity is novel, you cannot write new ideas. Even if it is a passionate plot, you cannot describe the atmosphere of blood surging.

If you want books to become popular on the Internet, you can get one of these two aspects.

Luo Hao's compliments made Chen Fan very useful because this was Luo Hao's real idea. He continued: "Comparing those divine books with mine, whose books do you like to read?"

Luo Hao thought for a while and said, "Those divine books are good, your books are not bad either!" His taste for reading books is really good.

"Look, you posted the book in the group, some people like it, some people don't like it, can you say there is a book that everyone praises?" Chen Fan asked with a smile.

Luo Hao shook his head. He was really unsure. No matter how powerful the work was, someone would not like it. If no one questioned a work, it only means that there were too few people reading this book...

Then he thought about it again that he was also an old bookworm, and was also ticked by Chen Fan's books, which made him die! Thinking of this, he gave up the idea of ​​Chen Fan's revision of the book.
Chapter completed!