This is a powerful person.
Not to mention how great this novel is, at least there is no problem if it is published in "Science Fiction World".
After reading the novel, Chen Mobai began to read other people's comments.
People's comments are not unanimous. Some people think that this novel has nothing new and follows the theme of The Martian. Others think that it is very difficult for such a short story to be so rich.
Of course, some people pointed out that although hcq said he didn't like water splashing, the shadow of water splashing can be seen in what he wrote.
Science fiction fans all know the characteristic of the short stories of Fushui Daoguo, and that is the inversion.
Starting from Mr. Fushui's debut novel "Alien Monkey", basically every one of his novels ends with a dramatic reversal. It seems that he particularly likes reversals.
Over time, this type of reversal has become a characteristic of floods.
The same goes for hcq's novel. Although it is not written very clearly, you can indeed see the twist at the end.
[Haha, I suspect hcq is a loyal reader of Fushui. Isn’t he a bit rebellious? 】
[I don’t feel like he’s being rebellious, he seems to be doing it on purpose.]
[Maybe what he said before was just a joke? 】
[Not necessarily, it may be that he is really crazy.]
[Although his novels are pretty good, I still can’t forgive him for belittling Fushui.]
[It’s already ten o’clock, why doesn’t hcq show up? 】
[He seems to be still a student. He has a lot of classes during the day and usually only forums at night. I remember "Su Mo" is the same, and I usually only see you at night. 】
When Chen Mobai saw someone mentioning him, he replied: [I usually don't have many classes, but the school doesn't have access to the Internet, so I can only go to school when I get home.]
[I envy you for still being students and your youth.]
[You envy me for being a student, and I also envy you for working and having the opportunity to surf the Internet during the day.]
【My job is to spank people online.】
【That makes me even more envious.】
…
While drinking tea in the reception room, Yu Dong glanced at Hu Changqing, who kept nodding, and said with a smile, "Old Hu, why don't you go to the guest room and sleep for a while."
Hu Changqing waved his hand, "No, it's too shameful."
"Then let me take down the low table from the bamboo couch and you lie down on it for a while?"
Hu Changqing glanced at the bamboo couch and said with a smile, "No need to take down the table, I can just lie down next to it for a while."
Yu Dong nodded, let him go, and then gave the manuscript of "Tian Ax Sand Palace" to Su Tong and others.
"Everyone, please take a look and give me your opinions. I am still very interested in Qiu Hao's myth series. The story chain is very complete, and it can be extended to other series in the future."
Yu Hua took the manuscript and said with a smile: "We actually don't know much about this aspect and can't give you much constructive advice. Of course, as readers, we will read it carefully."
Yu Dong nodded and looked at Yunlong, "Brother Yunlong, please be more attentive. I want to develop this series of Qiu Hao into film and television dramas in the future. As a professional, please give me more opinions."
"I'll try my best. Actually, I haven't come across this subject before."
The owner of the manuscript, Li Qiuhao, held the teacup in both hands, his eyes filled with unconcealable nervousness.
Seeing that he was nervous, Yu Dong smiled and said, "Qiu Hao, don't be nervous, you will often encounter this kind of situation in the future. Although I haven't finished watching "Tianaxe Sand Palace" yet, but based on what I have already watched,
, the quality of the manuscript is passable.”
Li Qiuhao grinned and said, "Thank you, Teacher Yu. Although I am nervous, I am more and more happy. It is an honor for me to have so many teachers see my work, and it is also a very good learning opportunity."
Yu Dong smiled and nodded, then turned his attention to the manuscript in his hand.
…
Since I had already read part of it yesterday, Yu Dong was of course the first to finish it.
The manuscript is very thick, but the main text is not particularly large, and much of the rest is annotations.
Yu Dong estimated that the text was about 200,000 words.
The story is not very exciting, but it is very ambitious.
Why do you say that? Because these 200,000 words seem more like a prequel, telling the history of the "Tianaxe Sand Palace". Starting from the Queen's Palace, it describes one by one how each palace and village was formed and how it was obtained.
famous.
The real story will not unfold until later.
Overall, Yu Dong is satisfied because it is consistent with his previous design.
What he wants is not a story that can attract people right away, but to create a complete system. In this case, a huge amount of space is needed.
In other words, as long as the trunk of a tree is out, it is naturally easy for it to flourish.
A complete IP world is completed step by step. As long as the main body figures it out, others can participate in it in the future.
After giving the finished manuscript to Yu Hua and the others, Yu Dong said to Li Qiuhao, "The foundation is almost laid. I suggest you start the story immediately. Do you have any ideas about the follow-up story now?"
"Next, I want to write the story of a passionate young man. In the Boshell Palace, the queen's daughter used to live. Once when she went out for a hunting trip, she met a young man. The two fell in love, but they were separated by the queen... I wanted to start from the young man's story.
Written from a different perspective, the world is in chaos and demons are rampant..."
Listening to Li Qiuhao's description, Yu Dong couldn't help but nod.
Although Li Qiuhao is a Chinese language student, he knows very well what readers like to read. A poor boy fell in love with a princess but couldn't love her. Later, after going through many hardships, he became a great hero who saved all people from the fire and water.
But even if he became a hero, he could not pass the last hurdle. The young man was coaxed by the queen and died unjustly in an iron prison. The princess could not look after her husband, and eventually turned into a looking stone, and her tears dried up to form a teardrop hole.
This story is both exciting and tragic, and young people will definitely love to read it.
Moreover, this story also involves Bai Suzhen. Bai Suzhen knew what happened to the princess and came to rescue her, but was immobilized by a demon and unable to move.
According to this idea, the story of Tianfu Sand Palace can also lead to many mythological stories and create a mythical system.
There are many Chinese myths and stories, and they are all very exciting, but the disadvantage is that without a complete system, it is difficult to form an IP that can continue to ferment.
For example, some mythical films that appeared later, although they can cause temporary commotion, they cannot be sustained because they do not have a complete story system.
Some people filmed Nezha, which became popular, and then someone filmed Jiang Ziya, but without a complete system, it would be difficult for these two stories to influence each other.
Everyone knows that there is a better system, but it is not easy to come up with a mythical system that is recognized by the public. It is time-consuming and labor-intensive, and you will not see any results for a while.
Yu Dong is willing to do his best, and he doesn't know whether it will succeed, but if he doesn't do it, then this thing may not be possible.
"You can continue writing according to your ideas. There is no need to publish the first part of the manuscript. After you write the second part, you will come up with a specific plan."
Li Qiuhao was a little disappointed when he heard that the first part would not be released for the time being, but he believed in Yu Dong and knew that Yu Dong had his own considerations, so he nodded and said: "Okay, Teacher Yu."
Yu Dong saw that he was a little disappointed and said with a smile, "But you don't have to worry. I will discuss it with the Deep Space Company later and I will try my best to ensure that you can concentrate on writing."
"Guarantee my writing?"
Chapter completed!