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Chapter 741 The entry point of the opening chapter

Another night.

It's still the same hotel, the same room.

Cao Jingyi, who had just finished taking a shower, was wearing a snow-white bathrobe. The difference was that she did not sit on the bay window to apply skin cream this time. The computer in the room was also turned on like last night. The difference was that the song being played at this time was "Hotel in California", which was as good as it was.

Cao Jingyi opened her suitcase and was choosing clothes, but she seemed a little confused. She took this piece of clothing, compared the photo to herself, and picked up another piece of clothing to compare herself.

After a while, she still had a tangled expression.

Then she smiled helplessly, sat on the edge of the bed, picked up the cell phone on the bed, found Sun Quan's number, thought about it, and sent a message.

——"The night is long, do you know which bar is better nearby? Can you take the time to take me to have a couple of drinks?"

When the message was sent out, Cao Jingyi smiled confidently, threw down her cell phone, got up and continued to choose clothes in her suitcase.

She believes Sun Quan should take the bait tonight.

He should have seen the text message she sent him last night during the day, and there is no reason for him not to take the bait today.

...

Qinglong Bay Villa Garden.

study.

In front of the computer, Sun Quan was trying to write the first chapter of the new book. After recent preparations, the outline and detailed outline of the new book have been completed.

It's the title of the book, and it has not been confirmed yet.

He was not in a hurry to make the title of the book, just wait for the day it was released to confirm.

Tonight he wanted to try to write the first chapter and find the feeling.

Daddy's writing... He has no experience. Although he has three children now, he does not have much experience with daddy because he doesn't need to serve him with his own hands.

But he still has some experience in raising children.

After all, his daughter is three years old, and he also participated in the process of his daughter's growth, so although he has not had rich experience in raising children, he has it.

But he felt that it would be not enough to write a good daddy article for such experience.

He felt that he needed some imagination.

Imagine that I have a baby, my wife ran away, I am very poor, I can’t even afford to buy milk powder from my children, and I have no experience in raising children. I have to find ways to earn money to buy milk powder and diapers for my children, and to work hard to give my children a better future.

He needs to put himself into the inner world of such a dad.

For this reason, he had been sitting in front of the computer for more than an hour and had smoked three cigars.

Logically speaking, he has an outline and a detailed outline. It shouldn’t be difficult to write a chapter.

This is the case in theory, but what he is going to write tonight is the first chapter of this book. Based on his years of experience in typing, the quality and feeling of the first chapter are very important.

Some people have already proposed the theory of the Golden Three Chapters in the online literature circle. Many authors write new books according to the theory of the Golden Three Chapters.

Sun Quan didn't have that habit, and he didn't care about the Golden Three Chapters. He was more willful. He hoped that his first chapter would impress and attract readers.

Why do you need to spend three chapters to do what can be done in one chapter?

Why test readers' patience?

This new book has a complete outline and detailed outline, but he was really ready to write the first chapter, but he was a little hesitant, hesitating where to start the beginning?

Do you start writing when your wife runs away? Or do you start writing when your wife is about to run? Or do you start writing after your wife runs away for a few days?

This is a bit like when cooking, holding a kitchen knife and facing a chicken, where to cut the first knife from is often hesitant.

Some people may chop off the chicken's head with one knife; some people may cut the whole chicken from the spine first; some people may choose to remove one chicken wing and then another chicken wing for the first knife...

Sun Quan was used to chopping off the chicken head first, then cutting the whole chicken, then removing the chicken wings and chicken legs, and finally chopping every part of the chicken into pieces.

And writing novels...

Every new book is a brand new experience. Even though he has rich experience in writing books, he still hesitates to where to start writing every time he opens a new book.

For example, this daddy article can be written from three different time periods, or before the wife ran away, or from the day the wife just ran away, or from the day she ran away, or from the day she ran away n days.

Based on his experience, he knew that these three time points, no matter which point they started writing, there were pros and cons.

For example, starting to write before the wife runs away, the advantage is that the book can give readers a big suspense at the beginning of the book - is the hero's wife running away?

It can be fascinating and attractive to watch.

This is a benefit!

The disadvantage is that when the hero's wife really runs away and never looks back, many readers will not accept it and feel very abused. Therefore, some readers will definitely abandon their books and leave. Even if he is a name for me, Lao Sun, this situation cannot be avoided.

If you choose to start writing on the day your wife ran away...

There are also benefits, which can prevent readers from abandoning the book because the protagonist's wife ran away. After all, the protagonist's wife ran away at the beginning, which is already a certain fact. For this book, the daughter-in-law ran away is the starting point for the male protagonist in this book. Everyone can accept that the male protagonist's opening miserable moment.

For some readers, they just cannot accept the process of witnessing the hero's wife running away.

As for the disadvantages?

There are, too!

For example: If you start writing here, the book will lose a lot of suspense at the beginning.

As for the third type... I started writing after the hero's wife ran away for n days...

It also has advantages, which can make the male protagonist appear in a taciturn and calm mood. According to Sun Quan's experience, the male protagonist's appearance in such a state can give many readers a good sense of immersion, and the protagonist's image will be more pleasing.

Many readers like calm and calm male protagonists.

Many readers don’t like the male protagonist who makes a fuss when encountering something or is about to die.

The disadvantage is that when writing from here, not only does it lack the suspense at the beginning, but it also lacks a lot of space to portray the true psychological state of the hero's wife after she ran away.

Simply put, in the characterization of the male protagonist, the depth will be lacking due to the different entry points of the opening.

The lack of depth may not matter to some readers. Everyone just wants to read a cool article, so it is enough. These readers do not need depth.

But for some old bookworms with relatively savvy tastes, they don’t like a work that has no depth.

Even if you like it, it won't be the deep kind of like it.

And Sun Quan is now a platinum author of Qidian. Among his book fans, many of them are old bookworms with tricky tastes. If they cannot take into account these flavors, their reputation after the publication of this book may be much worse.

Where to start writing?

In front of the computer, Sun Quan was still hesitating.

After hesitating for a while, he finally made up his mind.

I started writing the night when the hero’s wife ran away!
Chapter completed!
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