Chapter 628 Breakthrough in writing skills
Three days later.
In the Magic City, Honglou Obstetrics and Gynecology Hospital, ultrasound room, Yuan Shuiqing was lying on the ultrasound bed, Sun Quan was with him, looking at the fetal scene on the ultrasound screen, it was hard to describe what Sun Quan felt in his heart.
He could see two fetuses with hands and feet on the screen, and could also hear the "dongdong" heartbeat. The feeling of being a father again made his mind full of thoughts and difficult to describe.
Originally, there was only one daughter, but now... in a few months, his Sun Quan will be the father of three children.
Two of them are twins who look exactly the same.
That feeling of... the continuation of his life made him, atheist believer, feel that the rest of his life had meaning.
He has always believed that death is like a lamp extinguishing. If one day he dies, he does not believe that his soul has a chance to be reincarnated.
Just like the grass and trees in the wilderness... After the seeds of the plants fall to the ground, there is a chance to grow new plants, but the withered plants will no longer be able to survive.
Although his rebirth made him shaken by atheism, he still did not believe in the theory of reincarnation. He only believed that children were the continuation of his own life.
Looking at the ultrasound bed, lying quietly there, letting the doctor examine her, Yuan Shuiqing looked at her bulging abdomen, looked at her eyebrows and smiles at the corners of her mouth, and the love in Sun Quan's heart was unconsciously pouring.
Before being with her, he was not a person who was very dedicated in his feelings, whether in his past or in this life.
Before his rebirth, his ex-girlfriend left him, which had long changed his view of love.
But after being with Yuan Shuiqing, he was like a small boat that had been wandering on the sea for many years, and finally found a harbor.
He had no idea about other women outside.
Even if he occasionally feels something because of hormones, he can control his belt.
At the beginning, he was with Yuan Shuiqing mainly because of her beauty.
At that time, in his social circle, she was the most beautiful. Out of biological instinct, he wanted to conquer her.
In fact, in the past two years, as his social circle grows bigger and bigger, he has known many beauties of all kinds. In terms of appearance, there have been several who can compete with Yuan Shuiqing.
But he was still willing to just guard her.
Because what?
There may be many reasons, such as: she gave birth to him; for example, he subconsciously wanted to prove that as long as a woman does not let him down, Sun will never let him down first; for example, Yuan Shuiqing is still very beautiful and has a good figure...
But the most important thing is that his heart has a home and is very stable. He knows that this is happiness, the happiness he dreamed of before he was reborn and could not get, and he cherished it very much.
He didn't want to make her sad because of herself one day. He loved her and she loved him too.
And now... he has two more reasons to love her, the two children in her belly.
...
"What are you thinking?"
When he was going down from the hospital building, Sun Quan supported Yuan Shuiqing. Yuan Shuiqing seemed to notice that he was a little distracted, glanced at him with a smile, and asked softly.
Sun Quan laughed silently and whispered: "I'm thinking about the future, our future."
A curiosity appeared in Yuan Shuiqing's eyes, "Well, what did you think of? What would our future look like?"
Sun Quan: "I thought of two possibilities."
Yuan Shuiqing: "Then talk about it."
Sun Quan: "One is that the two little things in your belly are all girls. From then on, we will have three daughters. After a few years, we will have three sons-in-law. Then we can take turns to our three daughters' house every year, just like traveling, constantly changing places. It's quite comfortable to think about it."
Yuan Shuiqing held back a smile on the corner of her mouth, "What if these two of them in my belly are now sons?"
Sun Quan: "That's not bad! When they grow up, they can protect you and Xinxin for me. You and Xinxin will never be bullied in your life. I think... I have to cultivate the habit of loving each other and supporting each other since I was a child. In this regard, we must cultivate it well, and we must not be inconsistent with brothers."
Listening to Sun Quan saying this, Yuan Shuiqing's face was filled with a happy smile. The former iceberg goddess had long disappeared.
...
late at night.
The couple was lying on the bed, and their daughter Sun Jiexin was already asleep, and was enshrined by Yuan Shuiqing, while Yuan Shuiqing was enshrined by Sun Quan, with her back against his chest.
They were not asleep yet, and they were still whispering quietly.
Yuan Shuiqing: "Honey, how are you preparing for your new book? Haven't you finished writing the outline yet?"
Sun Quan: "It's already written."
Yuan Shuiqing: "Where is the title of the book? Are you sure?"
Sun Quan: "The tentative name is "He Can See the Hell", but I have never been very satisfied with this name. If I could think of a better name, I would have changed it."
“He Can Hell”…”
Yuan Shuiqing pondered and said, "This name is indeed a little ordinary. Do you have any other alternative names? If you have any, I will give you a reference."
Sun Quan was silent and shook his head slightly, "Forget it, I'll think about it again, and I'll tell you when I think about it."
In fact, he has indeed thought of several new book titles these days, two of which he is quite satisfied with, but has not decided which one to use.
Yuan Shuiqing was silent for two seconds and sighed softly, "Okay! Then think about it slowly, by the way, how many days are you going to stay here this time? Will you start writing a new book when you go back this time?"
...
The couple chatted casually, but the topic was not very nutritious, but it was very warm.
Two more days later.
Sun Quan drove back to City M and returned to his villa. That night, he sat in front of the computer in the study, opened a blank document, hesitated, and entered two new book titles.
One is: "The Undead's Last Wish".
One is: "The Ferry of the Dead".
The second title of the book is obviously imitating the style of "Soul Ferry", and he thinks "the undead" is more accurate than the word "soul".
Because living people also have souls, the name "Soul Ferry" is not very accurate, and people cannot tell at a glance that this is a ghost story.
And "dead" must refer to the soul after death.
He was more inclined to the name "The Undead's Last Wish" because according to the main line of the outline of the supernatural text he wrote recently, after the male protagonist awakened the Yin-Yang Eye, the main line of the story was to help the undead fulfill their last wishes.
Once the wishes of these undead will be completed, they will be sent to the underworld by the ghost messenger.
Compared with the title of "He Can See the Hell", "The Undead's Last Wish" is also slightly higher in the B-frame.
In front of the computer, a pot of tea and a cigarette, Sun Quan's thoughts slowly settled down, slowly calming in the supernatural world constructed from the outline.
After reading the beginning of the article I wrote before, he closed his eyes slightly, took a sip of smoke from time to time, and the smoke slowly spit out. His eyes closed, but the thoughts in his mind were particularly clear.
The tens of thousands of words that I just finished reading were played back repeatedly in his mind. In his spirit, he had long forgotten the outside world, leaving only the story in his mind.
Perhaps it is because the outline of this supernatural text is complete enough; perhaps it is because his current ability to structure the plot is indeed much higher than before; or perhaps it is because the plot of his new book is composed of small stories, making the plot of each small story easier to grasp.
Anyway, at this moment, the first little story about this book in his mind - the story between the male protagonist and his deceased girlfriend, slowly formed a complete plot line in his mind.
Where should suspense and foreshadowing be laid, where should the beginning, the beginning, the end... He became clearer and clearer.
When he opened his eyes again, he had already finished smoking a cigarette in his hand.
Pressing the cigarette butt in the ashtray casually, Sun Quan seemed to have no idea how to start the first tens of thousands of words of the story he had written before, and began to delete and reduce it.
When you have a smooth mind, you are so confident.
More than half an hour later, the original tens of thousands of words were modified by him.
The story is much more compact, and every part is the effect he wants.
He had no such control over the plot before.
Although he is already the author of Qidian's platinum and the platinum master in the eyes of many people, his previous control over the plot was indeed not so strong.
Specifically, the effect he wanted in the past was often only about 80% of the effect after writing the paper.
Now, he feels that the effect he wants has been achieved by only talking about the tens of thousands of words at the beginning of this book.
There is no doubt that this is an improvement.
His ability to control the plot of the story has improved.
...
Time is like water, day after day.
This time when Sun Quan returned to City M, he seemed to be in seclusion. Most of the time he was locked up in the study of the villa, sat in front of the computer, and wrote the plot in the outline into the main text. The more he wrote, the clearer his thinking became.
He knew that his writing skills had finally broken through to a new level.
This level is something he has never reached in his writing career.
The control of the plot is like the painter's control over the brush in his hand, reaching a new level. If you want to draw a straight line, you can draw a straight line at will. If you want to draw a circle, you can draw a very round circle at will.
This feeling is quite good.
During the time when Sun Quan was in seclusion and writing a new book, everything outside continued, and the world was still wonderful.
For example: The city general agency rights of 99 braised chicken are sold more and more.
For example: The variety show "Run! Brothers" suddenly launched the market, and its ratings and reputation continued to rise. In addition, in this variety show, the 99 braised chicken advertisement, which was also interspersed, pushed the popularity of 99 braised chicken to a new level, and there were more merchants who chose to join 99 braised chicken.
For example: On the author's forum, there are more and more people who suspect that he may no longer write new books.
For example: In the book review area of "The Sword of the Sword in the Cloud", while everyone was talking about several popular variety shows under his name, they called him to publish new book reviews as soon as possible, and more and more book reviews were called on him to publish new books as soon as possible.
Chapter completed!