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Sun Quan is reading Shenji's new book "Restoring the God".

Shen Ji's book "Shang Shen" has not been officially published, nor has it been published online. The reason why the manuscript of this new book appeared in front of Sun Quan was because Shen Ji found Sun Quan through QQ this morning.

Shenji asked Sun Quan to help him read his new book and give him some advice after reading it.

This situation is very common among online writers. Many authors will find one or two friends in the circle to help them out for safety after they start a new book.

Because the longer you write a book, the more you can understand what it means to be confused by the authorities.

Many authors write very well when writing a new book, and feel proud of themselves. They feel that they are too powerful. Once this book is shown, they may be very good.

Then, the gods slaughtered the truth, earning millions of dollars a year, living in villas, driving luxury cars, and all kinds of beauties are just waiting.

This is an illusion that many authors are prone to in the new book period.

So over time, many authors like to give the beginning of the new book a few glances to friends in the circle when they open a new book, and then listen to the opinions given by friends from the perspective of pure readers.

Because the latter sentence of "the authorities are confused" is "the bystanders are clear".

Shenji showed Sun Quan the beginning of the new book "Shang Shen" that had not been published yet, and this is the purpose.

Sun Quan accepted this happily.

He knew that "Restoring the Spirit" was a good book and had great value in learning.

It has been a long time since he last read this book. He has almost forgotten the specific plot and characters. Now he can read it again once, which must be a pleasure.

To this end, he paused his typing work today and was preparing to spend a few hours to read the 100,000 words that the Godji had come.

But as he looked, his expression gradually became wrong.

A little surprised and a little confused. He frowned from time to time and looked up at the ceiling, trying to recall what the plot of "Restoring the Spirit" I watched before he was reborn was about.

But the last time he watched "The Spirit of the Spirit" was really a long time ago, and it has been at least ten years since now. He has long forgotten the characters and plots of "The Spirit of the Spirit".

So his efforts to recall were futile after all.

In the original version of "Restoring the Spirit", he only vaguely remembers that the male protagonist and his biological father seemed to have become enemies of life and death. I want to beat my son to death, and my son wants to beat me to death.

But the father and son are both perverted.

Lao Tzu's magical power is extraordinary, and his qi and blood are as strong as a stove.

My son is gifted and cultivates his body and spirit, and his skills are progressing rapidly, so I can't beat my son to death, and my son can't beat me.

As for other plots?

Sun Quan only remembers one butler Wu and the champion Hou.

Can……

The plot of "Restoring the Spirit" that Sun Quan watched today does not seem to be in the direction of father and son fighting each other.

The relationship between the male protagonist and his father is actually quite simple and warm.

this……

Sun Quan looked at this version of "Restoring the Spirit" patiently with a puzzled look. He wanted to ask Shenji - the relationship between the characters in this book, are you not going to modify it?

If "The Spirit of Restoration" does not have a plot of father-son tyranny, can the early plot conflicts still be so intense?

As he watched the plot of this version of "Restoring the Spirit", he gradually got the answer to the question in his mind.

Shenji is indeed a little expert in creating plot conflicts. In this version of the plot, although the male protagonist and his father are kind and filial, their family still have a scum. They are the male protagonist's uncle and the male protagonist's father's elder brother. They are superb magical skills and have a high position and are powerful, but they have always wanted to destroy the male protagonist's family.

The reason is that the last magical power of the family's ancestors was inherited in the hands of the male protagonist, father and son. The male protagonist's uncle wanted to destroy the male protagonist's family, just to receive the last magical power of the family's magical power into his hands.

From the plot conflicts in the story, Sun Quan felt that it was OK, there was no problem.

But when he watched the subsequent plot, he always felt a little uncomfortable.

Maybe it was because of preconceived ideas! He had read the version of "Shang Shen" in the original time and space, so he was deeply impressed by the plot of father and son fighting each other in the book "Shang Shen".

An old saying goes: A tiger will not eat any child.

But in the original version of "Restoring the Spirit", the protagonist's biological father wanted to kill his son.

This is a very difficult main plot in most online articles.

Because in the eyes of many readers, such a plot will definitely feel extremely poisonous.

Father and son are tragic?

Few readers would want to watch such a plot.

However, the cultivation system of "The Spirit of the Spirit" has been innovating, and the description of various fighting scenes by Shenji is also excellent. Therefore, everyone can tolerate the plot of father and son fighting each other. After gradually reading it, the readers will be substituted for the entire plot as the readers become more and more deeply involved in the male protagonist, and will share the same hatred with the male protagonist.

And the version of "Restoring the Spirit" that Sun Quan was watching at this time, writing the male protagonist and his father as a kind father, a filial son, and a life-and-death enemy turned into a uncle, there was no problem with the plot conflict.

But in terms of unique novelty, it has become a little bit weaker.

Perhaps readers will be more accustomed to such a plot?

Or maybe such a plot will make "Supering the Spirit" seem less special?

Sun Quan could not make accurate judgments for a while, and he couldn't even give Shen Ji advice - let Shen Ji write according to the original version of time and space.

Because how to say it?

Tell Shenji - "Swap the identities of the protagonist's father and uncle! Let the protagonist and his father and son fight each other, it may be more interesting!"

If he really advises this, Shenji might think he is a lunatic.

Who would suggest that others kill their father? Even the father-killing in novels is unacceptable to many authors.

Because when the author writes such a plot, he will inevitably put himself in the identity of the male protagonist. It is no different from writing about the male protagonist killing his father.

So, he can't suggest to Godji like this.

In addition, when Sun Quan watched this version of "The Spirit of Restoration", he also felt that Shenji's ability to write fighting scenes seemed to have regressed a bit.

He doesn't remember how the original version of "Shang Shen" was written.

But he remembered that when he first watched the original version of "The Spirit of the God", every time he saw the fighting scene written by Shen Ji, he felt excited and felt very exciting and enjoyable.

But when I look at this version of the fighting scenes of "Ying Shen", although I feel that Shen Ji is writing great, it is a bit worse than the feeling of watching the original "Ying Shen" back then.

Is the God Foundation regressing?

Or have I read too many books over the years, so my vision has improved?

Sun Quan could not accurately judge this for a while.

The main reason is still that - he doesn't remember how the original version of "The Spirit of the Sun" was written. Without direct comparison, it is naturally difficult for him to make accurate judgments.

From his personal perspective, he thinks this version of "Shang Shen" is of good quality and well written, but it seems not as exciting as the original version of "Shang Shen".

He was still watching the plot behind, but his phone suddenly rang.

I picked up my phone and saw that it was Le who called me.

Sun Quan was a little confused. Why did Le call him at this time? Just a few days have passed. Has Le changed the plot of "The God of Fighting"?

He felt that the possibility was very small.

He didn't know that he was happy to revise the idea of ​​"The God of Fighting", and received guidance from the great female god Nangong Yan.

In Sun Quan's opinion, with his level of love, he would never be able to change "The God of Fighting" into a single heroine's article in just a few days.

Respond to the phone and stick the phone to your ear.

A happy voice came from the phone: "Old classmate! Han Li just said she was going to break up with me. Have you heard of it? Alas!"

Sun Quan's brows froze slightly, a little surprised.

"No, what's wrong? Are you quarreling?" Sun Quan asked.

Le: "Ha, that's right! She came to me just now. I was wearing headphones and didn't hear her coming in. Then she saw me chatting with a female netizen online. Alas! We men, you should understand. When chatting with female netizen online, you always talk a lot, right? Han Li just saw the chat content between me and female netizen, so she left angrily just now. Before leaving, she said she broke up with me, Alas! I'm so big now..."

Sun Quan: “…”

Sun Quan did not believe Le's explanation, but if the facts were true as Le said, he could indeed understand. Sometimes when Sun chatted with female netizens online, he would occasionally talk and have fun.

"Do you want me to persuade Han Li for you? Or do you want my wife to help persuade her?"

Sun Quan was silent for a moment and asked.

Le: "Well, if you can help me persuade her more, that's the best. I thank you in advance, thank you! Really, if I make up with Han Li, I will invite you and my sister-in-law to have a meal and drink..."

"That's not necessary, you'll be exempted from eating and drinking!" Sun Quangang heard this and interrupted with a smile and said no.

Le said on the phone: "I want it! I will definitely invite you when the time comes!"

Before Sun Quan could answer the conversation, the joyful voice changed, "Oh, by the way, the plot of "The God of Fighting" has been changed. Now I am a single heroine, old classmate! Can you do me a favor? Let your studio staff review it as soon as possible, and then we sign the contract as soon as possible! I want to get the copyright fee as soon as possible, and then buy a villa as soon as possible to propose to Han Li. You don't know that before she told me that she had just broken up, she slapped me in the face. I guess she didn't come here this time. She is afraid she really wants to split up with me. How about it? Can you help me?"

"Oh? Is it? It's been modified so soon?"

Sun Quan was surprised again and was quite surprised.

At the same time, I also thought in my heart that Han Li broke up with Le this time was probably true, and there was still a possibility of recovery?

And... Le was anxious to get the copyright fee of 300,000 yuan at this time, and really wanted to buy a villa? Then propose to Han Li?

Or... he just took advantage of this reason to take advantage of Han Li's breakup with him, afraid that time would delay for a long time, and if Han Li had not yet reconciled with him, I would not buy the adaptation rights of "The God of Fighting", so I was anxious to get the copyright fee first?

Le: "Well, it has been modified. The plot in the previous one has not moved, but in the recent chapter, I made the male protagonist psychologically give up his feelings for the other two heroines, so now it's a single heroine."
Chapter completed!