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Chapter 390 Guiding Newcomers

City, Sun Quan listened to Fu Lei’s narration on the phone, and his expression was a little surprised.

Someone else is also recommending BBQ to Tangren? Are there such good people in the world? This kind of helping others is really rare!

After Fu Lei finished speaking on the phone, Sun Quan smiled and said, "Well, I understand. Since that's the case, then you should adjust your strategy appropriately!"

On the phone, Fu Lei: "Adjust the strategy? Mr. Sun, what do you mean?"

Sun Quan: "We are not sure about the other party's offer to Tangren. You said just now that Manager Lan held more than one work in his hand and was shocked, so the other party should have other works recommended to Tangren. Therefore, after you find a way to talk to Manager Lan, you don't have to mention the copyright transfer fee. Let's talk to them about the profit sharing! Reduce their investment risks and share the risks of this drama with them. Do you understand?"

Fu Lei: "Well, what do you mean is we use this adaptation right to invest in the shares?"

Sun Quan: "Well, that's about it!"

Fu Lei: "Then how much profit we want?"

Sun Quan: "When talking about this, you must first determine how much money they plan to invest in this drama, and then determine the percentage of the income dividend based on their total investment! I will give you a briefing. You can calculate the minimum price of our adaptation rights of two million. This is the bottom line. Above this bottom line, you try to strive for a higher price, okay?"

Fu Lei: "Two million? Mr. Sun, we only had 500,000 when we bought it recently."

Sun Quan: "What else? Buy 500,000, sell 600,000? 700,000? Fu Lei! You have the courage to magnify me a little, the bottom line is 2 million! Below this price, don't sell it! On the basis of this lowest price, you can strive for a higher price for me. The specific amount you can sell depends on your ability!"

Fu Lei: "This is OK, okay! I understand."

After the call, Sun Quan put down his cell phone, smiled at the young man opposite the desk, and said, "Hu Cong! Let's continue to talk about the topic just now, your outline will be changed! The story background is too big, yes! According to the division of work set at our previous meeting, you are only responsible for writing the outline and the detailed outline, and the specific text will be handed over to the other two colleagues to write. But when you write the outline, do you also have to take care of the abilities of those two colleagues?

Well? They are all newcomers! You made the outline story background so big and so complicated. Do you think your two colleagues can handle it? Can you write this story?"

Hu Cong is a thin young man, over 1.6 meters tall, weighing about 100 kilograms. Apart from his big head, he has no other big characteristics.

He and the other two were the three writers who had recruited before Fu Lei went on a business trip.

It was also found from the author's forum. Compared with the other two newcomers who have just entered the industry, although Hu Cong has been thin and small, he has been in the industry for more than three years and is not a pure newcomer. However, the few works he has written have all failed without exception. The best result is that he has ordered for more than 200 for the first time.

Before Fu Lei left, he handed the three of them over to Sun Quan.

Mr. Sun first asked each of them to write an outline and the beginning of a 20,000-word article.

After writing, Sun Quan took the time to take a look.

Many problems were found.

One has a teenager who has a teenager who has a very biased writing style towards the traditional author, but his writing style is still the same as the other who has no teenager who has written nonsense. At the beginning of just 20,000 words, Sun Quan actually saw several nouns that have no problem with the explanation of nouns. The problem is that the few nouns that are explained are very common, but that guy has explained it over and over for a long time, and there is a serious suspicion of hydrology. Another one is Hu Cong in front of him.

Hu Cong's advantage is that the outline is more particular, the story background, character setting, treasure setting, main plot and side plot, etc. are all set very finely, and they have the style of a science and engineering man. In Sun Quan's opinion, his shortcomings are also very good as a science and engineering man.

This strong style is directly reflected in Hu Cong's main text. It is written too seriously. His 20,000 words start to make Mr. Sun dizzy and feels that he is reading an academic paper by a professor at a certain university. No matter whether this is the worst time for a university professor to be hacked, Sun Quan felt that according to Hu Cong's writing style, it was really a miracle that he could write a work that had been ordered for more than 200 years.

This kind of writing method can be read and read, and more than 200 people are willing to pay to subscribe.

After reading the three outlines and the beginning of the three articles, Sun Quan called the three of them to the conference room and had a meeting together.

At the meeting, he named the advantages and disadvantages of the three of them. After saying that, he asked them if they had any different opinions?

These three people are quite self-aware. Although they are a little unhappy, they still nodded to recognize Sun Quan's evaluation of them.

It would be good to have self-knowledge. Seeing that they had no different opinions, Sun Quan divided the work for them.

Hu Cong, who has been in trouble for several years, has written the outline more carefully and is more detailed, was arranged by him to write the outline and detailed outline specifically.

His request to Hu Cong was very simple: "The bigger the outline, the better, and the finer the outline, the better.

Today, two days later, Hu Cong gave him an exaggerated outline.

What did Sun Quan see just now?

In the outline that Hu Cong just gave him, he set up the three realms of human, god and demon. Not only that, he also set up 7 planets and more than 100 races. There are 12 races specifically set up by him.

In addition, he also set the three realms of human, god and demon in great detail, and wrote a lot of myths and legends.

After reading the outline, Sun Quan had the words he said after putting down his phone just now. He was actually quite speechless. Is Hu Cong too straightforward to understand his words?

If he asked him to write the outline in a larger way, would he write so big?

Hu Cong lowered his head slightly, his skin was a little hot, and he said in a daze: "Boss, why don't I go and change it?"

Sun Quan sighed and said, "Please keep it a little bit! Is it good to take care of the other two colleagues? Don't make things too difficult for those two fat tigers, okay?"

Two fat tigers?

Hu Cong was a little surprised when he heard this. He looked up at Sun Quan, then laughed slightly. He nodded and stood up and said, "Okay, I understand, boss! If it's okay, then I'll go out first?"

Both colleagues were indeed fat. Hu Cong thought they were two fat tigers, and he felt quite vivid.

Sun Quan waved his hand, "Go! Shrink the background of this outline and then narrow it down. I asked you to write the outline in a broad way, so that you can write it concisely and make it bigger, not that you can make the background of the story so big."

Hu Cong: "Well, I understand!"

Hu Cong left, and Sun Quan pressed his temple with a headache.

It's really tiring to coach newcomers and fail.

As soon as Hu Cong got downstairs, two fat tigers and Dong Xiaoyu looked at him curiously.

Dong Xiaoyu was just curious.

The two fat tigers, Pan Yun and Li Lixi, were a little curious and nervous.

Pan Yun, who had a round head, immediately ran over and asked in a low voice: "How is it? What did the boss say? He didn't scold you, right?"

Li Lixi, who had a 37-part hairstyle, also ran over and asked in a low voice: "Have you passed the outline? Did the boss say that you should write it for me? Or for Pan Yun?"

Hu Cong shook his head and smiled bitterly, "No! The boss said that I wrote the story too much, so I will shrink it down again and again!"

As for Sun Quan's ability to take care of the two fat tigers, he was not stupid, so he didn't say it.

Pan Yun frowned: "The background is too big? Isn't it good to be bigger? Didn't he ask you to write it in big time during the meeting before?"

Li Lixi: "That's right! He asked, but at this time he thought you were writing too much?"

Hu Cong looked at the puzzled expressions of the two fat tigers and felt a little moved: These two people still have no clear understanding of their abilities!

In fact, when he was in Sun Quan's office just now, he didn't say anything. In fact, the outline was not entirely done by him. The two fat tigers also gave advice and gave a lot of opinions.

It was Pan Yun who wanted to write about the opinions of the three realms of man, god and demon.

Li Lixi strongly suggested that the opinions of more than 100 races should be set.

"What the boss said is to write in a broader way means to write concisely and broaderly, not to write the story background without limits."

To give a brief explanation, Hu Cong, who didn't talk much, returned to his work position and began to think about how to compress the outline on the computer.

The remaining two fat tigers are there to look at me and I look at you.

Finally, Pan Yun asked: "Will you go first next? Or should I first?"

Li Lixi sighed and shook her head and said, "You go and die first! Let me live for a while."

Pan Yun nodded, touched his ink hair, took a deep breath, and turned around and walked upstairs.

"Dongdong!"

"Enter!"

Pan Yun smiled and walked to the opposite of Sun Quan's desk, and sat down at Sun Quan's sign.

"Boss, my revised manuscript has been sent to your email address. Have you read it?"

Pan Yun asked nervously.

Sun Quan looked up at him, with a little helpless expression, "I told you not to write so literary. Do you really understand what it means?"

Pan Yun frowned, raised his hand and touched his head, and asked in a low voice: "Boss, do you mean that my revised manuscript is still not good?"

Sun Quan asked back: "Do you think it's OK?"

Pan Yun was silent.

Sun Quan asked again: "Why is the four or five hundred words of the description of the scenery at the beginning of your first chapter still there?"

Pan Yun opened his mouth and replied weakly: "I, am I not describing well?"

Sun Quan did not answer and asked again: "Do you still remember what you wrote in the first chapter? Which chapter did the male protagonist come out? Do you remember?"

Pan Yun's voice became a little lighter, and his face was already a little hot. "The first chapter is a wedge, which mainly introduces the birth of the male protagonist's family. As for the male protagonist, he came out from the third chapter, is it too late to appear?"

Sun Quan smiled with helplessness, nodded, and sighed: "It's okay, I have a good memory! Since you know what the problem is, then go and modify it! Let the male protagonist appear in the first chapter and give you two tasks! One is the first chapter, so I will set up the male protagonist's character for me!

Second, while establishing the character of the male protagonist, I set me up a sufficiently attractive suspense or an expected selling point! Well, it is limited to less than 2,500!"
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